L Milton Hankins Poet Rhyme

An Open Window

An open window invites a curious look
What enticing stories are lurking inside
Fluttering pages of a neglected book,
What has become of those who occupied
This once grand abode of the leisure class,
Living in the most favored neighborhood
With manicured shrubs and fresh-cut grass,
What turned the tide from times so good?
When tight shingles framed a painted sill
Flowered walks welcomed all who'd heed,
Admiringly, and most likely they would still
But untended the place has gone to seed.
All that beckons is an open window calling
Attention to the contents long abandoned,
I stand in awe wondering why I'm stalling
The old place my attention commanding.

Written September 1, 2022

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Jim Slaughter September 2, 2022 at 11:32 AM Well, I guess I'm a bit weird, L M. For me "an open window" is for looking out of and for letting a fresh breeze in. I do love abandoned houses and buildings, of course, but more so from a distance or as settings for scary books and movies. L Milton Hankins September 2, 2022 at 12:08 PM I pass this building about every day, Jim, and it always captures my attention. It's in a beautiful location, but is going to rack and ruin. Shame.

Kim Rodrigues September 1, 2022 at 4:17 PM A makeover…make it your own! L Milton Hankins September 1, 2022 at 6:09 PM Ah, I'm afraid this one would be out of my price range even in its present condition! And, if I could afford it, I couldn't afford the fixin's.

Michael Tor September 1, 2022 at 3:29 PM Love this theme Milton. There is a road that my wife and I love to travel on. There you will find old abandoned homes some dating back many years. You wonder about the families that lived there and what happened to the home. I always wonder why they didn't sell and make some money and a New owner would more than likely take care of the property. Thanks for sharing... Michael Tor September 1, 2022 at 7:08 PM It is nice to receive inspiration from things that you see and inspire a theme in writing. L Milton Hankins September 1, 2022 at 3:43 PM I passed this place on my way to the park today. It was such a gorgeous day here, so I thought I might get inspired in the park to write something of merit. I came up with two poems that worked for contests; this one was just inspired by the open window on the second floor.

Ilene Bauer September 1, 2022 at 1:02 PM great poem, milton! i always wonder about who lives inside the houses and apartments i pass, especially those in which we get a glimpse inside... L Milton Hankins September 1, 2022 at 3:44 PM (chuckling) You know, I do that, too, Ilene. My wife used to make up stories about people...folks she didn't know at all...just observed their homes, etc., etc.