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What words are apt, to transfer emotion Where lies the fulcrum of throbbing vibrance What makes cessation, lead to elation Which hue of dusk, triggers its remembrance Soft brilliant hues of spiritual light Invisible flickers in space are known Ignition renewal through day and night Rapture beyond measure, we alone own Pranic pathways within, coming alive Wisdom downloads and a ride in the void Nodes within form, to music divine jive Our thought rested awareness, by love buoyed Such open secrets, hidden in plain sight Teleports our heart to boundless delight 18-October-2021

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Date: 10/18/2021 8:56:00 AM
I like your poem…I like the words, “What words are apt, to transfer emotion”, that is so true. Words can change the directions of those “Pranic pathways”. Thank You for sharing :)
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Date: 10/18/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thank you, Edward! Happy you enjoyed!

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