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An Open Lotus

He was the first to step into murky waters Drowning in heavy silt and silence Surviving so long without falling He had changed the kindness in him drained But to his surprise he saw a Lotus rise Far more beautiful than he could imagine A respite in the desert of his very existence Open to the skies of hope and sustenance He cultivated compassion in those petal curves Filling his heart with joy and resurrection Till he stood beautiful again from yesterday’s plight The Lotus open standing alone, a beautiful sight! 21.7.22 Sponsor: Joseph May No.1

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Ann Peck

Date: 7/31/2022 10:43:00 AM

I love what you created for that subject. Congratulations!

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/1/2022 12:17:00 AM

Thank you dear Ann.....I am glad you enjoyed the poem :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/31/2022 6:48:00 AM

I love lotus and so your poem that amazingly expressed its loveliness. Thanks for sharing my dear friend, Carol. Congratulations on your win and this fantastic write! God bless you always. Hugs

Carol Mitra
Date: 8/1/2022 12:16:00 AM

Thank you dear Len....I love the Lotus flower too....I am glad the poem resonated with you :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/30/2022 4:21:00 PM

Wonderful write Carol, Congrats on your win

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/30/2022 11:01:00 PM

Thank you dear Joseph....I am indeed honoured that you liked the poem.....Take care :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/21/2022 8:41:00 AM

Beautiful! Good luck in the contest, Carol

Carol Mitra
Date: 7/21/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thank you.....I am glad you liked the poem :)