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An Oop Pinion About Omitted Ir Rack

Mime moost re cent poem titled Mental Illness...Inherent Since Birth fourth line down lacked an accidentally ohm mitt head "rack", thus presenting dearth of understanding, and set in motion a domino effect (hard to believe), but YES offsetting tilt of the Earth, hence an immediate necessity arose to forewarn unsuspecting readers experiencing swollen gaseous equatorial (abdominal) girth homeopathic remedy easily concocted brewing herbal tea over hearth (chamomile my favorite - with a dollop of honey), a curative that doth mesh well synchronizing linkedin saw tooth assemblage mitigating tell tale grinding gears finds unwanted frictional heat, which haint so swell possibly causing, (when sprocket incorporated) permanent chain damage requiring extremely delicate "heroic" measures to quell hoop fully this poetic patch doth not require ye tubby brash boot more critical concern would constitute head crash, perhaps necessitating total revision of poem whipped off in a dash so concludes the rhymed reason sent faster then greased lightening doth flash.

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