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An Omen of Birds

Five thousand pairs of black wings halt And fell from the cold Arkansas sky In one district alone the default In Beebe did the feathered creatures die And while the flock above them perished there The fireworks flew all wingless on the eve Of the coming year, and without reprieve From the trials and turmoils of life's care Knew that omen was something more And wait for the beast on dawn's shore. Five thousand black birds dead, my friend A sudden shiver through me send And I hear like splashing oars, loud The sea beast swimming in the cloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/29/2011 1:59:00 PM
Poor black birds, L'nass.:( Feels like "An Omen of birds", for sure. I can't imagine how it would feel to find them dead and scattered across the yard. Nature must have it's own way of showing what sits on the future's horizon. Harmless birds. Wishing you the best! love, Mikki
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:50:00 AM
Great expression of Life...! Great as always ! Let you wonder what next .......
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:28:00 AM
I literally also got shivers as I read about this, L'nass and you brought the chills with this haunting write-- very well done and it does make one wonder what it all means-- a wake up call perhaps that we should take better care of nature-- amidst the revelry, we should always be aware of the consequences of what we do--- thanks for sharing-- nikko :)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:00:00 AM
When will Mankind learn? Powerful writing, my friend. Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2011 9:45:00 PM
oh, my gosh, this is so eerie, so scary. It's true? Very effective writing!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:11:00 AM
Very expressive ans well written. But I belive that tfireworks were not the cause of that tragedy. No bird died here and we hat lots and lots of fireworks (and we have many birds here). There must have been another reason for this! Thank you L'nass Shango for your kind comments and have a great 2011!
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Date: 1/4/2011 11:40:00 AM
A very good write. Could be a message, something to think about. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 1/3/2011 2:52:00 PM
Just read about this, not good. Whatever the cause mother nature is sending a warning. Will we listen i wonder. Would make a good contest. The thousands of birds in Arkansa. Good job!!
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