An Old World War Ii Injury

Well how do you do, my name is Jack Brain's still working but it's got a big crack It's a World War II injury Watching the war on TV Munching on chips put my back outta whack © Jack Ellison 2015
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Nunez Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:02 PM
LOL!!! On my face a silly grin / though I know it's a sin / to be reading sillies / when I still have hillies /of work but I dally dillies!!! ( I know, you need not tell me, It's the other way around, but WTH, it wouldn't rhyme!) :D Hugs! Kim
Ellison Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 12:08 PM
It's your own personalized version of a limerick! You could call it a "Limerkim"!!! Hugs, Jack xxx
Laurie Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:23 PM
G'day Jack... I don't know what to write Jack, except you might have to give the chips away for health sake. Regards - Lindsay
Ellison Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 7:17 AM
NAW! Think I'll just eat myself into oblivion!!! LOL
Eastman Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Honestly Jack... Something is definitely out of whack... But that's OK... cause that's why I say... You've become our LimmerJack...
Ellison Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 7:15 AM
Really like, "Limmerjack"... just posted one called, "The Limmerjack Song"! Check it out! Loving hugs, Jack xxx
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