An Old Shovel

An old shovel
Shelved under the ray
Of another day
Nearly done,
Though the finch still flies
Otherwise, and the mare
Under the glare of
The darkening sun,
Knows the Old Bright Girl 
Has had her fun,
So off to our sleep 
Spots we stumble
Until our Final Grumble,
And we need, again,
The shelved shovel
To end our days,
And all of life's 
Lovely ways.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 5:23 AM
And all of life’s lovely ways. What an ending. I really love your rhymes here. They flow in such a melodious manner, so lyrical and your personification is so creative. Loved this
Caliri Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 10:03 PM
Thank-you! I enjoyed the process. You're too kind.
One Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:03 AM
You personified it very well..
Caliri Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Thank-you!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:09 PM
I like this. It’s deceptively deep and all encompassing. The more I read it the more I like it. xomo
Caliri Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:25 PM
Thanks! I consider it my "old man and the sea" of all my poems.
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