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An Old Pickle Jar

A dusty, wooden table, painted a vibrant red, stands alone in a vacant ole' farmhouse kitchen. Nearby is a window sporting many panes of broken glass, allowing vivid sunlight to filter throughout this rotting structure. A large jar adorns this wobbly legged piece of furniture. A brown wilted vine drapes itself over the edge, meeting a dry, splintered wooden floor, covered of mud, dead grass and murky colored yellow weeds. As I canvass this grim place, a vision of sunniness glinting from old glasswork fills my mind of what this room may have once contained. Light, airy happy memories of a mother's home baked cookies for her children, holidays and family gatherings. Indeed, an empty pickle jar filled with lustrous sunshine can put a smile within one's heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest. The best to you in the finals Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:48:00 AM
Virginia,CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 9/22/2010 7:17:00 AM
Great retrospective vision here. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:41:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2010 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:11:00 AM
Nice nostagic poetry Virginia,yes such mundane things are very evocative.rgds Brian
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Date: 6/12/2010 8:03:00 AM
Thank you both for your comments. I appreciate it. Ginny
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Date: 4/13/2010 1:06:00 PM
That's lovely Virginia !
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:51:00 PM
Indeed it can put a smile within one's heart. Viginia, Good Job, Agape, Moses
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