An Old Pickle Jar

A dusty, wooden table, painted a vibrant
red, stands alone in a vacant ole'
farmhouse kitchen.  Nearby is a
window sporting many panes of 
broken glass, allowing vivid sunlight 
to filter throughout this rotting structure.

A large jar adorns this wobbly 
legged piece of furniture.
A brown wilted vine drapes itself over 
the edge, meeting a dry, splintered wooden
floor, covered of mud, dead grass
and murky colored yellow weeds.

As I canvass this grim place, a vision
of sunniness glinting from old
glasswork fills my mind of what this room
may have once contained.  Light, airy
happy memories of a mother's
home baked cookies for her children, 
holidays and family gatherings.

Indeed, an empty pickle jar filled
with lustrous sunshine can put a
smile within one's heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest. The best to you in the finals Virginia. Love, Carol
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September 23, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Virginia,CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
Austin Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Great retrospective vision here. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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September 22, 2010 at 1:41 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week. Love, Adeleke
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Virginia. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 12:11 AM
Nice nostagic poetry Virginia,yes such mundane things are very evocative.rgds Brian
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June 12, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Thank you both for your comments. I appreciate it. Ginny
Fox Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 1:06 PM
That's lovely Virginia !
Freeman Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 6:51 PM
Indeed it can put a smile within one's heart. Viginia, Good Job, Agape, Moses
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