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An Old Man

An Old Man is looking at me In my heart filled with rain First, keeping his head low Tells me he would do anything, To stop this rain An old man is looking at me Tells me that everything will be alright He expects me to trust him Turns his head above, While telling me how he hates the rain An old man is looking at me In sadness never seen before. Nothing can be explained...

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Date: 12/26/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/23/2024 3:12:00 PM
Crazy old geezer oughta be able to offer something of value. Sheez
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