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An Old Man

An Old Man is looking at me
In my heart filled with rain
First, keeping his head low
Tells me he would do anything,
To stop this rain

An old man is looking at me
Tells me that everything will be alright
He expects me to trust him
Turns his head above,
While telling me how he hates the rain

An old man is looking at me
In sadness never seen before.
Nothing can be explained...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/26/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/23/2024 3:12:00 PM
Crazy old geezer oughta be able to offer something of value. Sheez
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