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an old elephant hurts of experiences whole body proves life in expanse of mind uproar ends in quietude memories of life now alone on street nothing's to be carried on except ancestors

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Date: 3/9/2017 11:59:00 PM
So beautiful. Elephants intrigue me for their very human way they love and feel emotion. I sense sorrow in your words yet they are lovely and rich with meaning. many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 11/14/2016 6:23:00 PM
Elephants are one of my favorite creatures ever. You made this poem not only intriguing, but somewhat mysterious and witty. Good write that deserves a 7/7. -JWE
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Date: 10/16/2016 11:36:00 AM
Well penned dear friend. Enjoyed.........//hugs
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Date: 10/16/2016 11:34:00 AM
Lovely my friend. Make memories for when it is quiet and we can remember.
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