An Old and Trusted Friend

...dedicated to John Barrick Cecil


Tree branches bowed under the weight of the snow, 
like penitents kneeling, as Christmas shoppers
reveled in the joy of the season. 
I left the house and struggled through the cobbled streets
to meet a man I hadn't seen in years.
He was the model of discretion then, a confidant.
I could always count on his fidelity and trust.

I shivered, pulled the scarf more tightly round my neck,
and pushed my way through the milling crowds 
to await his arrival. And there he was.
The old familiar shambling gait,
the oft-worn brown fedora perched upon his head,
and suddenly I felt better.

I chose a dimly lighted tavern.
We ordered drinks and dinner; linguini and shrimp,
a dish for which we shared a common relish,
our conversation tentative at first,
until the effects of the alcohol loosened our tongues,
and we talked of Oxford, days full of happy memories.

But later, as the evening wore on and the tavern's
customers left with errands of their own, we were left alone.
Silence descended. Thoughts of earlier in the day
came crashing down upon me. 
He sensed something was wrong, as he always did.

"She left me," I blurted out, sobbing uncontrollably.
He said nothing, and gently squeezed my hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/1/2012 6:52:00 PM
Friends are important at a time like that. You have a knack for this type of write.
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
Ah, a friend to understand the adversities of life. Can we ask more than that, a presence, an ear and perhaps a hug. They lend their strength to help us get through the dark times. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:27:00 AM
Life isn't always what it seems and in it's passage shows it's true face. A great and knowing friendship with a grip of the hand says I am here for you without judgement or opinion. Just Beautiful. A wonderful emotional poem. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/25/2012 9:38:00 AM
I love your perfect placement of "relish." The end of your poem in so few words wiped out the preceding details. Love how you turn the ordinary into a great big "pow." True to life. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:02:00 PM
a poignant and poetic testament to a true friend, told in your unique style, which is always a pleasure to read!
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