Subhas Chandra Chakra Poet Free verse

An Ode To Your Beauty-04

On that moment
Time froze 
And the Ocean
Paused to breathe 

And tried reading 
My eyes and me, 
What were the feelings
That thrilled and chilled me! ! 

Your looks 
vis-a-vis had pulled away
Me out of me...

The Earth and the sky and the Ocean
Nothing existed around.
Nothing except that beauty celestial
Emanating from your eyes
Filling elegance around me.

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Darren White October 1, 2017 at 6:04 AM I have read all four of your odes. They all are very beautiful. Probably as beautiful as the person you are writing them for. You have image-rich language. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)