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Premiere Contest WinnerAn Ode to Last Leaf

Quote: " I am the last leaf on the tree and the wind is blowing" --G. Hinckley

In the fading light of autumn's embrace, 
A poet's pen dances, a tribute to grace. 
An ode to the last leaf, resilient and strong, 
A symbol of endurance, a theme of the song.

While the valley and the hills have transformed into colorful space,
You, the last leaf, linger in this desolate space.
You have watched the vibrant dance of leaves with the wind,
Their colors ablaze, a spectacle to rescind.

Caterpillars transformed, to butterflies they soar,
Yet here you remain, grounded, yearning for more.
Eagles circle overhead, a somber sign,
Of your impending fate, a destiny entwined divine.

All other birds have taken flight, left youe behind,
Locked in solitude, with thoughts unkind.
You await the mighty gust, the breath of release,
To set you adrift, to grant you peace.

Like the cycle of life, uncertain and vast,
You ponder your fate, as each moment goes past.
When you finally descend, to the earth below,
You will join the chorus of leaves, in nature's grand show.

In that final moment, you will be free at last,
No longer confined by the seasons that gone past,
For in the end, like the leaf in the fall,
We all return to dust, surrendering to the call.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bhattacharjee Avatar
May 16, 2024 at 8:04 PM
A beautiful poem. Loved the the last but the third stanza the most.
Guptar Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Congratulations Jay on your top placement with a lovely Ode that conveys the life cycle. Appreciated all the verses, particularly the last two lines. Wish you a pleasant weekend filled with high thinking.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 8:46 AM
wow, way to go with this awesome poem, Jay. BIG congrats on your trophy win
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 6:08 AM
I see why you won first place! Congratulations, Jay! …resilient, strong, symbol of endurance… linger in this desolate space…the eagle circling overhead…other birds left you behind…love it all! A fave!
Edmonds  Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 1:29 AM
Jay, I’m not surprised you came top of the list of winners in Regina’s poetry contest. Your poem is magnificent, love it, well done… Beryl
Mcintosh Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Congratulations on your top win in my Ode Contest. I really love this. God bless you always, love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:14 AM
- A beautiful poem, Jay ... the cycle of life ... in the end all return to dust, whether we like it or not - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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