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An ocean-ku for Heather

broad blue horizons - wet toes curl in soft sand dunes soaking in sunshine *Changed 'fat' for 'broad' on 17/04/2013.

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Date: 5/13/2013 7:00:00 AM
this is really nice. And that was a wise decision to change that word to "broad"!
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Date: 4/25/2013 8:33:00 PM
A great haiku here Michael.Enjoyed.
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Date: 4/24/2013 8:04:00 PM
Michael, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations Michael ..awesome
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:13:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..A great idea you have created with a few words..I can just see the scene..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2013 12:42:00 AM
i love being near the ocean too, so this haiku Heather's oceanku is a chance to celebrate. thanks for your visit sara.
Date: 4/15/2013 1:52:00 PM
I can feel the warm sand, and gosh, does it feel good!! I'm soaking up the sun in my imagination........love it!!
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/18/2013 12:40:00 AM
glad to convey that warm seaside feeling to you.