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An Ocean-Ku For Heather

broad blue horizons - wet toes curl in soft sand dunes soaking in sunshine *Changed 'fat' for 'broad' on 17/04/2013.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2013 7:00:00 AM

this is really nice. And that was a wise decision to change that word to "broad"!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2013 8:33:00 PM

A great haiku here Michael.Enjoyed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:04:00 PM

Michael, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 1:31:00 PM

Congratulations Michael ..awesome

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2013 2:13:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..A great idea you have created with a few words..I can just see the scene..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Michael Dom
Date: 4/18/2013 12:42:00 AM

i love being near the ocean too, so this haiku Heather's oceanku is a chance to celebrate. thanks for your visit sara.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2013 1:52:00 PM

I can feel the warm sand, and gosh, does it feel good!! I'm soaking up the sun in my imagination........love it!!

Michael Dom
Date: 4/18/2013 12:40:00 AM

glad to convey that warm seaside feeling to you.