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An Obsession Love

 
The Fountains mingle with the river and the river with the ocean; The winds of heaven mix for ever With sweet emotion. Nothing in this world is single; All things by law divine In one spirit meet and mingle, Why not I with thine?- Percy Bysshe Shelly, Loves Philosophy ____________________
In dreams, I go to a garden of love- There are so many beautiful flowers; the sky above me is a robin blue, and I wear a wedding dress, of sweet ivory covered with pearls; and I am walking up a pebble path. A lovely chapel waits with doors open, but when I reach it- the doors are locked; and I am full of unrequited longing. I back away from the chapel weeping, and turning away I begin to run- running, running through the garden of love. The blue sky gone, now there is darkness, the garden gone, now I am in a sad place. And I fall to my knees- I am at his tomb, the stone cold tomb of my eternal lover; a lover who cannot return my embrace. It is a one-sided obsession this love, there is no romance, no sweet kisses; a stone returns no love- But tomorrow I will dream it again, and forever, this unrequited love. _____________________ November 28, 2016 Poetry/Verse/An Obsession Love Copyright Protected, ID 16-853-629-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Unrequited Love Sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place
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Roy Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Very beautiful ...
Sharma Avatar
December 3, 2016 at 12:34 AM
So beautifully written!
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:53 PM
The dream of dreams, congratulations Constance...
Sergi Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:59 AM
VERY EMOTIONAL AND BREATHTAKING TO A POINT. BEAUTIFUL POEM, B.W!
Vinson Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Poem and Picture, both outstanding. : )
Carmack Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Congrats Constance on your win. Some wounds will never heal.
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Simply touches the heart, Constance:) congratulations:) a 7:)
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:24 PM
aww Constance this is so touching many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations Constance in the first placement of the contest. A beautiful poem.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:29 PM
I love this! Very well composed!
Green Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 5:44 PM
Absolutely beautiful. So soft and soothing. There is a comfort to your words and this felt so very good to read.
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