An Oblivious Revelation

 U n c o n s c i o u s  while the entire universe 
fights against her reality,
           she seems to have been MISTAKEN…
She makes all things decent worse, 
holding an insensitive mentality,
while all her inhibitions have been TAKEN-
She carries on without contemplation,
                   forcing her into an oblivious revelation.
C o n t i n g e n t  upon her choice to let go,
           she reveals the reasons she was rejected-
Stoic and heedless, she craves CONCERN…
Preoccupied with loss she sinks below,
never feeling appreciated or connected.
For absorption of memories she does YEARN.
She craves the desire of a burning sensation, 
                     Forcing her into an oblivious agitation.
N e g l i g e n t  to life, she’s always distracted,
feeding off intellect while absent-minded-
            Uncurious as to why she’s never felt LOVE…
She once found hope but she overreacted,
and always had to be kindly reminded, 
that sometimes awareness comes from ABOVE.
She feels a rush of an inadvertent obliteration, 
                      forcing her into an oblivious orientation. 





Form O-Only One
Sponsor, Broken Wings
May 8, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/22/2017 8:37:00 AM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative and wonderful write
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Date: 5/21/2017 11:18:00 PM
Don't normally like all-caps but used in moderation, it is very effective in this piece. Well-done, Laura. Congrats to the poet in you.
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