Notes About The Poem
Well, I thought the picture was humourous in its many incarnations but yet I hate seeing animals dressed up it's not right to make them the but of humour. So, I thought why not give you a metaphor in a charming Irish brogue of an English Quintain? For surely, half the Irish are English aren't  they? Or are they kittens dressed in English garb and hung on a hook to be the but of jokes?

An Irish Caterwaul

Out a place, surely, a kitten in pants
hung out to dry for heaven’s sake,
men wander about like little ants
professin’ knowledge, make no mistake,
there’s a tale pussy footin’ in the wake.

As men lie, ‘tis their ears grow pointed,
and their teeth are sharpened to fangs.
Sure and begorrah, they’re not anointed   
these foolish followers o’ evil gangs,
hooked they be, and so, they hang.

So, reel in yer tail divils, take off false skin
yer kittenish ways will get ye naught.
Pray to the laurd God for kinder kin
they’d that will lave ye as they aught
and would na lave ye hangin’ caught…
 

*Sure and begorrah/ sure and by God
**Irish Dialect
Poet: D. Guzzi  8/4/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ramage Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 4:56 PM
Well done my wee Irish lass! Congratulations on your win, I really enjoyed your poem. Lee
Beck Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:48 PM
good colloquial Irish stuff....long time since I saw the word "caterwaul"......nicely done Debs.....by the way how is you these days?...haven't heard a peep for a while....hope all is fine...best wishes as always...Syd
Sweetheart Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in the contest luv.. enjoy special honor for excellent piece ..
Horne Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Many congrats, Debs : )
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Hangin In There" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 1:03 AM
Cute and great use of the dialect, Deb. Congrats on your success in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Jones Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:27 AM
Wow, Debbie, nice write! Another Guzzi for sure!
Roberts Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 12:25 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest Debbie, very interesting dialect used, I very much enjoyed it
Loving Iii Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:06 PM
why do i feel that this is political. and a vote has been changed from one who was swindled. john
Guzzi Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 8:15 AM
yes it IS a political write ;) [sue me LOL]
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:53 PM
tantalyzing sweet it be, the kitten swings, n there be ye be, all dressed in irish lore, begorrah sure...by me before:) done diddly did it.........Don
Sweetheart Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Wow Debbie this is wonderful with the dialect interspersed into the lines .. reading is a delight .. good luck with your new contest which I took the leap of faith and entered..haha.. my own interpretation of course.. luv..
George   Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Sure and begorrah, this be a delightful poem ye have written, me dear Deb. Lainie
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