An Invitation From Salt Lake City

An Invitation 
from Salt Lake City
(1)	In this great nation, the 
United States of the America,
	People who had been 
residing for quite a while,
	And if you have never 
ever been to Salt Lake City 
altogether
	Should come and visit 
without hesitation at least in a 
whirl.
	To all our friends, treat 
this as an Invitation, who-so-
ever.

(2)	Although Summer time is 
relatively gorgeous to stay
	It rivaled the heat of our 
Golden Land of Myanmar
	Far exceeding the 
temperatures all day. 
	Also in the open season of 
Spring that we all admire
	There are lots of Canyons 
to go around if one desires.

(3)	In times of Autumn 
Season, when leaves fall
	Whirling to the ground 
like a chopper,
	Little birds work hard to 
stock supplies for winter long 
haul
	According to the mundane 
nature that never falter
	As humans, like the 
Avians, we labored year round
	Our people donating a 
cent, if earned a dime
	To consolidate good deeds 
in next life all the time
	That is the real goal of 
Myanmar people that all shine.

(4)	Winter solstice is the 
coldest of all the time
	Snow caps the mountain 
peaks, serenely and beautifully,
	Embracing the city and its 
lakes magnificently fine
	The beauty and the grace 
of the City that is 
extraordinary.
	Sights and sceneries 
embed in your memories that 
entwine
	This is the Salt Lake City, 
our domicile that outshines.

	By  Dr Ko Ko Thein
                     Salt Lake City

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/5/2013 7:04:00 AM
Just wanted to stop by to say I would enjoy reading more of your work. Myself, I speak only one language and admire those who speak more than one greatly. Your contest entry did not include a haiku and the inclusion of a haiku in prose is what makes a Haibun, I am sad you did not understand. Next time please soup mail me with any question. Light & Love
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Mya Thein
Date: 3/7/2013 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for your advice. I will try my best. I will soup mail you if I need.
Date: 2/12/2013 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love
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Date: 1/27/2013 8:16:00 AM
Mya, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Glad to see you among the poets on the soups front page. Love your wonderful verse. Have your self a nice & beautiful Sunday... ~PD
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