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An Invitation From Salt Lake City

An Invitation from Salt Lake City (1) In this great nation, the United States of the America, People who had been residing for quite a while, And if you have never ever been to Salt Lake City altogether Should come and visit without hesitation at least in a whirl. To all our friends, treat this as an Invitation, who-so- ever. (2) Although Summer time is relatively gorgeous to stay It rivaled the heat of our Golden Land of Myanmar Far exceeding the temperatures all day. Also in the open season of Spring that we all admire There are lots of Canyons to go around if one desires. (3) In times of Autumn Season, when leaves fall Whirling to the ground like a chopper, Little birds work hard to stock supplies for winter long haul According to the mundane nature that never falter As humans, like the Avians, we labored year round Our people donating a cent, if earned a dime To consolidate good deeds in next life all the time That is the real goal of Myanmar people that all shine. (4) Winter solstice is the coldest of all the time Snow caps the mountain peaks, serenely and beautifully, Embracing the city and its lakes magnificently fine The beauty and the grace of the City that is extraordinary. Sights and sceneries embed in your memories that entwine This is the Salt Lake City, our domicile that outshines. By Dr Ko Ko Thein Salt Lake City

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/5/2013 7:04:00 AM
Just wanted to stop by to say I would enjoy reading more of your work. Myself, I speak only one language and admire those who speak more than one greatly. Your contest entry did not include a haiku and the inclusion of a haiku in prose is what makes a Haibun, I am sad you did not understand. Next time please soup mail me with any question. Light & Love
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Mya Thein
Date: 3/7/2013 11:19:00 AM
Thanks for your advice. I will try my best. I will soup mail you if I need.
Date: 2/12/2013 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love
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Date: 1/27/2013 8:16:00 AM
Mya, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Glad to see you among the poets on the soups front page. Love your wonderful verse. Have your self a nice & beautiful Sunday... ~PD
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