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An Inspired Rose

Shall we guilty claim a rose, as her beauties rain? when suppressing her prickles floods of her blood bedew her roots absorbed in grace. Shall we banish beaming scents of a rose rising in light? when flourishing wonders and streams of delight flowing into human veins avidly captured beyond words. Shall we a beholder blame for admiring in shining light a rose? when many a reason grant noble human hands to hold an evergreen rose rejoicing at divine creation. Shall we a rose deny a deep inner desire to serve and give? Bearer of Aphrodite and Venus Love showy but unrevealing transcends words what she conveys. Shall I Euterpe invoke my rose to inspire? with sacred music words above the clouds penetrating fervent hearts that never leave the heavens of poetry. August 11th, 2018

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/30/2018 3:27:00 PM

Very unique beauty and extraordinary depths in your exquisite poetry my good friend! This has the sweet tones of a hymn, a prayer expressing love , romance and the blessed treasures in living... A fav .. a true gem...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/31/2018 3:34:00 AM

You are showering my humble work with the beauty of your poetic words.. your praising dripping with generosity and kindness.. thank you so much Robert.. You have honoured me with your gracious visit and uplifting feedback. My deepest regards and be always blessed.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/30/2018 7:37:00 AM

I am so glad to see your poem climbing the best poem chart..kudos my friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/31/2018 3:28:00 AM

When I read so kind and praising a feedback from an avid reader I do get the feeling that my humble write is the best one! Thank you so much dear Vijay for your elevated soul, generosity and poetic core.. always a pleasure and honour to read your genuine feedbacks.. Be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/26/2018 2:29:00 PM

Your poems have a beautiful flow like a river of warm chocolate flowing from a fountain. Thanks for these great reads.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 3:56:00 PM

So much elated and touched by your heartfelt and poetic feedback! So much grateful to you.. Your visits and feedbacks are highly appreciated. Be blessed M.L. Kiser.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/19/2018 2:26:00 AM

As always Besma your beautiful poetry sighs and breathes pure beauty, just like your inspired rose, all we can do is inhale and sigh in gratitude. Thank you for this my dear friend. A definite fave for me...Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/19/2018 4:08:00 PM

Here you are dear Maria showering me with the scent of your blossoming words adorning my humble write with your lovely and sensitive feedback. Always a great pleasure to see you on my page cheering the chambers of my heart. Thank you so much dear friend. My love and hugs. Be blessed always.

Kenisha Shines

Date: 8/15/2018 4:50:00 AM

very beautifully written!have a great day

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/16/2018 2:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Kenisha. So much elated and humbled by your genuine feedback. Be blessed.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/14/2018 10:49:00 PM

Such lovely poetry, reminds me of some old Persian poetry I am reading now! So nice!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/16/2018 1:58:00 AM

A knowledgeable soul as you are, you inhale from the light of Persian poetry to raise higher the voice of your ink! I'm humbled by your lovely feedback Arthur. Thank you so much. Be blessed.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/13/2018 7:42:00 PM

We shall read your lovely poetry, Besma...your poetry is blossoming like a Rose...love & internal light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/14/2018 6:28:00 AM

Such an uplifting, generous and genuine comment is every poet's reward from a reader of high value and grandeur! Thank you so much Winged Warrior for your visit and lovely feedback. Be blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/13/2018 5:37:00 PM

Euterpe, the muse of Lyric poetry, would have been very proud to hold your pen and help in the writing of such a wondrous poem that incarnates the beauty of a divine rose in all its glory! A Fave dear, Besma! Inspiring and profound poem! PS : Sorry to have missed your poem!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/14/2018 6:23:00 AM

My honour and great delight to receive such a praising feedback! Thank you so much for the fave. Deeply humled. Be blessed.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/14/2018 6:22:00 AM

Never be sorry for missing one of my writes dear Demetrios, I understand all the constraints that sometimes prevent us from doing so.. what we share is a sweet passion to write and read not an obligation.. It is both a great pleasure and a brightening light what I derive from reading your beauties dear Demetrios.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/13/2018 6:40:00 AM

I love this heartfelt rose-adoring creation my good friend! Just what I needed these dark days. This shines a light, a beacon to journey towards! Exactly what a fine poet should give to his/or her readers! Such inner soul revelations are the foundation of poetry and the reason we write and informed readers read. A fav.. a gem ...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/13/2018 11:56:00 AM

May all the beauties of the universe brighten your heart and cheer your soul Robert. A soul of abundance, a poet of grandeur will never cease to exist wrapped up in beauty and grace in the realm of words! Thank you so much for your generous words. I highly value your visits and uplifting feedbacks. Be blessed.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/13/2018 12:30:00 AM

A very nice poem, our lives are like a rose. A short lifespan, sometimes beauty and aroma, and sometimes thorns and pain...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/15/2018 3:02:00 AM

Besma, I love your poetry, you are a very talented lady... all the best.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/13/2018 11:51:00 AM

Pashang, It is kind of you to stop by, read and appreciate my humble write! Thank you so much. Deeply honoured and elated.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/11/2018 7:06:00 AM

Deep and meaningful poem--amazing how the answers are implicit in your probing questions..delightfully instructive..well done, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/12/2018 2:56:00 AM

Elating and of high value are your feedbacks dear Vijay..my humble write is brought to light only when an ardent reader honours it with a rewarding visit and comment. Thank you so much for your constant support.. Be blessed.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/11/2018 5:38:00 AM

Wow this is a wonderful poem , impressive classic terms employed with nice effect and the wording sensational. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/11/2018 6:53:00 AM

So much pleased by your lovely and appreciative feedback dear Zaynab. Thank you so much. Honoured and humbled. Be blessed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/11/2018 1:42:00 AM

A beautiful write Besma. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/11/2018 6:44:00 AM

Your honourable visit and uplifting feedback I highly value. Thank you so much Tom! Be blessed.