Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

An Inspired Rose

Shall we guilty claim
a rose, as her beauties rain?
when suppressing her prickles
floods of her blood
bedew her roots
absorbed in grace.

Shall we banish beaming scents
of a rose rising in light? 
when flourishing wonders
and streams of delight
flowing into human veins
avidly captured beyond words.

Shall we a beholder blame
for admiring in shining light a rose?
when many a reason
grant noble human hands 
to hold an evergreen rose
rejoicing at divine creation.

Shall we a rose deny 
a deep inner desire
to serve and give?
Bearer of Aphrodite and Venus Love
showy but unrevealing
transcends words what she conveys.

Shall I Euterpe invoke
my rose to inspire?
with sacred music
words above the clouds
penetrating fervent hearts
that never leave the heavens of poetry.

August 11th, 2018

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Robert Lindley August 30, 2018 at 3:27 PM Very unique beauty and extraordinary depths in your exquisite poetry my good friend! This has the sweet tones of a hymn, a prayer expressing love , romance and the blessed treasures in living... A fav .. a true gem... Besma Riabi Dziri August 31, 2018 at 3:34 AM You are showering my humble work with the beauty of your poetic words.. your praising dripping with generosity and kindness.. thank you so much Robert.. You have honoured me with your gracious visit and uplifting feedback. My deepest regards and be always blessed.

Vijay Pandit August 30, 2018 at 7:37 AM I am so glad to see your poem climbing the best poem chart..kudos my friend. Besma Riabi Dziri August 31, 2018 at 3:28 AM When I read so kind and praising a feedback from an avid reader I do get the feeling that my humble write is the best one! Thank you so much dear Vijay for your elevated soul, generosity and poetic core.. always a pleasure and honour to read your genuine feedbacks.. Be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser August 26, 2018 at 2:29 PM Your poems have a beautiful flow like a river of warm chocolate flowing from a fountain. Thanks for these great reads. Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 3:56 PM So much elated and touched by your heartfelt and poetic feedback! So much grateful to you.. Your visits and feedbacks are highly appreciated. Be blessed M.L. Kiser.

Maria Williams August 19, 2018 at 2:26 AM As always Besma your beautiful poetry sighs and breathes pure beauty, just like your inspired rose, all we can do is inhale and sigh in gratitude. Thank you for this my dear friend. A definite fave for me...Maria hugs Besma Riabi Dziri August 19, 2018 at 4:08 PM Here you are dear Maria showering me with the scent of your blossoming words adorning my humble write with your lovely and sensitive feedback. Always a great pleasure to see you on my page cheering the chambers of my heart. Thank you so much dear friend. My love and hugs. Be blessed always.

Kenisha Shines August 15, 2018 at 4:50 AM very beautifully written!have a great day Besma Riabi Dziri August 16, 2018 at 2:01 AM Thank you so much Kenisha. So much elated and humbled by your genuine feedback. Be blessed.

Arthur Vaso August 14, 2018 at 10:49 PM Such lovely poetry, reminds me of some old Persian poetry I am reading now! So nice! Besma Riabi Dziri August 16, 2018 at 1:58 AM A knowledgeable soul as you are, you inhale from the light of Persian poetry to raise higher the voice of your ink! I'm humbled by your lovely feedback Arthur. Thank you so much. Be blessed.

Winged Warrior August 13, 2018 at 7:42 PM We shall read your lovely poetry, Besma...your poetry is blossoming like a Rose...love & internal light...^WW^ Besma Riabi Dziri August 14, 2018 at 6:28 AM Such an uplifting, generous and genuine comment is every poet's reward from a reader of high value and grandeur! Thank you so much Winged Warrior for your visit and lovely feedback. Be blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 13, 2018 at 5:37 PM Euterpe, the muse of Lyric poetry, would have been very proud to hold your pen and help in the writing of such a wondrous poem that incarnates the beauty of a divine rose in all its glory! A Fave dear, Besma! Inspiring and profound poem! PS : Sorry to have missed your poem! Besma Riabi Dziri August 14, 2018 at 6:23 AM My honour and great delight to receive such a praising feedback! Thank you so much for the fave. Deeply humled. Be blessed. Besma Riabi Dziri August 14, 2018 at 6:22 AM Never be sorry for missing one of my writes dear Demetrios, I understand all the constraints that sometimes prevent us from doing so.. what we share is a sweet passion to write and read not an obligation.. It is both a great pleasure and a brightening light what I derive from reading your beauties dear Demetrios.

Robert Lindley August 13, 2018 at 6:40 AM I love this heartfelt rose-adoring creation my good friend! Just what I needed these dark days. This shines a light, a beacon to journey towards! Exactly what a fine poet should give to his/or her readers! Such inner soul revelations are the foundation of poetry and the reason we write and informed readers read. A fav.. a gem ... Besma Riabi Dziri August 13, 2018 at 11:56 AM May all the beauties of the universe brighten your heart and cheer your soul Robert. A soul of abundance, a poet of grandeur will never cease to exist wrapped up in beauty and grace in the realm of words! Thank you so much for your generous words. I highly value your visits and uplifting feedbacks. Be blessed.

Pashang Salehi August 13, 2018 at 12:30 AM A very nice poem, our lives are like a rose. A short lifespan, sometimes beauty and aroma, and sometimes thorns and pain... Pashang Salehi August 15, 2018 at 3:02 AM Besma, I love your poetry, you are a very talented lady... all the best. Besma Riabi Dziri August 13, 2018 at 11:51 AM Pashang, It is kind of you to stop by, read and appreciate my humble write! Thank you so much. Deeply honoured and elated.

Vijay Pandit August 11, 2018 at 7:06 AM Deep and meaningful poem--amazing how the answers are implicit in your probing questions..delightfully instructive..well done, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri August 12, 2018 at 2:56 AM Elating and of high value are your feedbacks dear Vijay..my humble write is brought to light only when an ardent reader honours it with a rewarding visit and comment. Thank you so much for your constant support.. Be blessed.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri August 11, 2018 at 5:38 AM Wow this is a wonderful poem , impressive classic terms employed with nice effect and the wording sensational. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too. Besma Riabi Dziri August 11, 2018 at 6:53 AM So much pleased by your lovely and appreciative feedback dear Zaynab. Thank you so much. Honoured and humbled. Be blessed.

Tom Cunningham August 11, 2018 at 1:42 AM A beautiful write Besma. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri August 11, 2018 at 6:44 AM Your honourable visit and uplifting feedback I highly value. Thank you so much Tom! Be blessed.