An Infinite Finale In Gray

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Clouded skies somberly cascade
upon motionless vistas,
floating unrehearsed melancholy hues
where muted feelings roam
on an autumn morning echoing
a weary winter dream

I sit beneath a weeping willow’s
unhurried leaves fluttering
like silent wind chimes,
quietly pacing unheard melodies,
as dandelions seek the sun now
merely an absent reflection in my own tears

And I reminisce of the days when
magnolia petals were our sunrise,
sweetly scenting the virginal dawn
in soft aromatic whispers,
lazily lingering upon our skin
when your smile was my every morning

Now I wait below wilting branches,
listless arches desperately reaching
but never touching the ground,
allowing desolate thoughts to wallow
as the soft earth reclaims me
from an infinite finale in gray
~

Inspired by Sandra Adams poem Crimson Tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/20/2019 12:09:00 AM
Beautifully somber piece, Chris ~
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thanks my friend. :)
Date: 12/19/2019 5:24:00 PM
Nice thoughts and glad Sandra`s poem was able to inspire you. Its always good when other poets bring us their gifts. Thanks for sharing this
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Chris Green
Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Greg.
Date: 12/19/2019 3:42:00 PM
What a write Chris...glad you found inspiration from one of Sandy's writes, that's very cool when that happens, I remember her poem. Yours is very somber, but you know I love melancholy and this one is another fave!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 4:16:00 PM
Thanks my friend. I wrote this the same day she posted hers but must have got sidetracked and never posted it. I found it today. Glad you liked it.
Date: 12/19/2019 2:51:00 PM
- A deeply touching ... very beautiful poem, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. You are always so kind to, I appreciate you Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/19/2019 1:14:00 PM
Wow. I am touched that my poem could inspire such a poignant yet beautiful poem. Great metaphor and such vivid imagery with the right touch of emotions flowing through this one Chris. I love this and of course have to fave it ... exquisite and touching poem :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so very much Sandy for your kind words and inspiration. I don't even remember when you posted that poem but I wrote this one the same day and then failed to post it. I found it today. : ) Your poetry is always an inspiration to me my friend.
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