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An Indoor Plant Wilts

An indoor plant wilts Clouds come and go in the sky Heavy heart inside

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Date: 8/13/2017 10:15:00 PM

Another great Haiku Probir!

Date: 8/7/2017 1:52:00 PM

Nice piece. I enjoyed. Can you send your phone no ?

Date: 8/5/2017 3:42:00 AM

So many different meanings to this haiku and it is a true picture of human life. Well penned. :) Regs Sunita

Date: 8/2/2017 7:54:00 PM

Love the poem, but so heartbreaking... ~*

Date: 8/2/2017 7:29:00 PM

My apologies! I am so absentminded, I do this all this the time! Enjoyed the Haiku!

Date: 7/31/2017 4:55:00 AM

It's always sad when a plant wilts...great haiku Probir...god bless...^WW^

Date: 7/30/2017 4:49:00 PM

lovely haiku Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 7/30/2017 3:13:00 PM

I can feel your words Probir. Well done. It reaches the reader :)

Date: 7/30/2017 12:46:00 PM

I am very sensitive when it comes to plants and to the feelings they provoke my friend, Probir! BRILLIANT!

Date: 7/30/2017 11:19:00 AM

This is a beautiful piece Probir.