Michael J. Falotico Poet Limerick

An Indian Giver of the Heart

Way back in the years you gave to me your heart..
Yanked it back so fast before it could even start..
I pitter pattered through my mind to see what went wrong..
I questioned my inner mind to just see where I belong..
A gift so special torn away , the pain like a piercing dart..







P.D. Indian Giver Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 27, 2010 at 5:03 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Michael. Love, Carol

James Fraser December 27, 2010 at 6:33 AM Michael, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin December 27, 2010 at 5:30 AM Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich December 26, 2010 at 11:39 PM Hi, Michael, don't know how I missed this one. But it's nice to see someone that also took the "romantic" route with this theme. Congatulations on your big win. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan December 26, 2010 at 7:39 PM Many congratulations dear Micheal for this super win. A very Happy New Year to you and your family.

Sharon Ruebel December 26, 2010 at 6:42 PM Hello Michael, This is wonderful, Congratulations on your win! As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 26, 2010 at 4:56 PM Congrats Michael, my White Knight ... on your 2nd place win in PD's contest... awesome ..enjoy with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 26, 2010 at 4:56 PM Are u snowed in ??? we have blizzard condition and 24 inches predicted luv... Jersey Girl .. forever and always..luv..

John Freeman December 26, 2010 at 8:51 AM Congratulations Michael on your worthy win with this great one. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud December 26, 2010 at 7:12 AM fun, fun!! congrats on your big win, michael.. nette:)

Daniel Cwiak December 26, 2010 at 6:20 AM Wonderful write, Michael, on the pains of a broken heart and the inner questions it brings to those who have suffered it. Dan C

Sara Kendrick December 26, 2010 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta December 26, 2010 at 5:15 AM Congratulations on this second place win in the contest of PD, Michael

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2010 at 11:06 PM Smiles Michael,, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick December 7, 2010 at 4:32 PM Excellent one that should do well in the contest..Good luck ..Reads like winners' circle to me..Your comments were so uplifting.Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 4, 2010 at 12:36 PM Another creative write Michael.. a true version of Indian Giver luv... I did the same with my Indian Giver Casanova... good luck in the contest.. great one my friend.. my W.K. ..your J.G. forever with luv..