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An indentation of innocence

Lay siege to my vulnerability, D i s a r m my chastity, Indent my innocence with your capability, Pierce my supple skin and....... drink my bittersweet vermilion essence

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Date: 4/17/2025 11:57:00 AM
Billie, don't let such a creature get near enough to you to allow that to happen. Very dramatic lines.
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/17/2025 12:16:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback. I have been rewatching Vampire shows as of late and got some inspiration from that. I enjoy the different mythologies and lore of vampires. Going all the way back to Ancient Greece.

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