An indentation of innocence


               Lay siege to my vulnerability,  
        D i s a r m my chastity,  
    Indent my innocence 
         with your capability,  
      Pierce my supple skin and.......
              drink my bittersweet 
                      vermilion essence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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April 17, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Billie, don't let such a creature get near enough to you to allow that to happen. Very dramatic lines.
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April 17, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Thank you for the feedback. I have been rewatching Vampire shows as of late and got some inspiration from that. I enjoy the different mythologies and lore of vampires. Going all the way back to Ancient Greece.
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