An Incomplete Love Story

Squat tooting tugs and barked commands,
Gruff sailors straining, lines cast off:
Our Stars and Stripes glide up proud mast,
This ship, vibrating, coaxed to life,
Brown river, churning, drifts behind …

Behind, behind, where spouses mope
From vantage on the shrinking wharf;
Among them, Gail does linger still,
Her crimson dress so vivid, clear:
A fit of breeze wafts through her hair,
Frail palm she reaches out again,
Sun glints and shimmers on her ring,
Bright gem I offered from bent knee—
And oh! the tears, wet bursting flood
From eyes I’ve known since playground days,
I hugged her tight, my future wife,
But now, that bliss, our love must wait …

I hide my tears, watch Norfolk fade,
Then buoys, coast, blue ocean waves;
Gray warship, this, cuts through the sea
Yet, still, my heart remains ashore,
I dearly yearn just one glimpse more.



July 12, 2018
An Incomplete Love Story Poetry Contest,
Faraz Ajmal, sponsor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/3/2019 4:26:00 PM
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Date: 7/27/2018 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Well-written. Sad, has happened many, many times. Well dine!
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:20:00 PM
Ahh, you have written this poem really beautifully, it was sad and certainly a joy to read how our duties separate us from he people we love but these duties are also important, right? Anyway many congratulations on your win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/12/2018 3:14:00 PM
A lovely write, David. My son was in the Navy. I know how hard it is to say goodbye. Thank you for your service:)
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