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Not sure if this would have met the requirements for the contest but I did like the theme.

An Incomplete Love Story Too fast the pages riffled through dreary decades innocence confronted loves lusty laughter growing faint in darkened corridors. Forever’s love hesitant in a hazy distant stare, longing for a return of its longing, passion adrift on a fleeing vision. An incomplete love story written in blank pages riffling too slowly too sadly, too soon, to end. John G. Lawless ©7/10/2018

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Date: 7/11/2018 8:51:00 PM
Another fine write, John. I'd say you're on a roll!
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