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An Incomplete Love Story

It was the first day of first grade I met her, I used to love to pull her ponytail. Whenever I tried to speak my words would slur, my plan to get her attention was an utter fail. It was the first day of first grade I met him, he used to pull my hair and stick out his tongue. One day I saw a pair of scissors and decided that his hair needed a trim, we were lucky to find true love so young. By sixth grade I was finally able to speak, I told her she was beautiful in front of her best friend. At recess she loved to play games of hide and seek, I despised all of the mixed signals she would send. By sixth grade I decided I had a crush. He called me beautiful and I ran away, I told him that we were too young and did not need to rush. I wish that I could rewind time back to that magical day. The clock struck senior year and I asked her to prom, she must not have felt the same way. She told me she would let me know as she reapplied her cherry lip balm, I never heard from her so I went with my friend Sharpay. The clock struck senior year and he asked me to prom. My thrilled heart almost leapt out of my chest, stupid me had to play it cool applying my cherry lip balm. I sent him a text but he never responded; that night I could not bare to rest. Ten years later, I now know that true love is only a silly myth. Now married to Sharpay; bonded after she borrowed my phone the night before prom. Wonder why never heard back from the woman still hopelessly in love with, I still dream about tasting her cherry lip balm. Ten years later, I now know that true love is only a silly myth. If only I did not play it cool; I should have told him how I truly felt, I would have been with the charming man I always knew I should be with, I dream about our destined lips meeting; it makes my demolished heart melt. July 11, 2018 An Incomplete Love Story Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal 2nd Place

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Date: 7/27/2018 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:34:00 PM
Thanks Eve. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate it.
Date: 7/27/2018 4:33:00 PM
What a creative way to write this poem of incomplete love. A sad story written so well. Enjoyed!
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/27/2018 8:33:00 PM
Thanks Susan. I was hoping both perspectives would be interesting. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 7/25/2018 9:56:00 AM
You have a fantastic story-telling ability, Miss Haley!!! Totally love it... will be back for more! Congrats! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/26/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Jack. I appreciate your encouragement.
Date: 7/24/2018 1:03:00 PM
You have done a really nice job in writing this wonderful poem, I really like how you showed the poem from two different point of views, the story and ending are same, but opinions are different, it was really sad in the end that how both wanted to be together but couldn't, many many congratulations to you on your wonderful 2nd position, good luck and have a really nice day
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/24/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Faraz! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I really enjoyed the theme for this contest. Thanks, Haley
Date: 7/11/2018 12:21:00 PM
Nicely done, Haley, it's interesting that you wrote it from both points of view. It's kind of sad when two people feel that way but just never seem to be on the same page; you always wonder what might have been. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Haley Fisher
Date: 7/11/2018 12:25:00 PM
Thanks John. It is true that life definately does have some "what if" thoughts.

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