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An Inclusive Circle--

An Inclusive Circle
When genesis breaks begin ends; Enemies all omega friends; Seldom challenge raptures go forth; Endings varies never sprout sports; Foreseen so are the middle cries; Of the burning soul's teary eyes; Upon status of ill good-byes; Hallmark beginning makes you quake; An inclusive circle What was never was always blend? Eternity begins no ends; Over and over does transcend Bring on the conclusion breaking; Dominate spaces yet remain; An inclusive circle 7/27/19
Rondeau Poetry Contest Rondeau poetry form only Sponsored by: charles messina Syllables Per Line: 8 8 8 8 8 8 8 0 8 6 8 8 8 8 8 6

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Date: 8/4/2019 7:43:00 AM
This is a great poem James. Unfortunately in your line "Bring on the conclusion break" there are only 7 syllables and there should have been 8. Loved the poem. Charlie
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 8/4/2019 8:26:00 AM
Ahh!! I need to fire my editor LoL! Thanks for the read and all you do. It was a fun yet hard to write for me, was the first Rondeau...guess I'll just Write On. James

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