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22.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Broken glass, mosaic Stomach chills Grasp the truth Shallow becomes deep Emotions stir with tender assault Pale poker face The serpent's greed lacking purpose creates anxiety and harbors anger for revenge The tongue is split I read your eyes detailed Time will be the judge an boiling pot - core of soul

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/31/2024 6:25:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I think you capture the unease we feel when our heart tells us what is being presented is not true. I like giving the benefit of the doubt, but that doesn't always work out. As you say, time is indeed a great judge.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/30/2024 6:33:00 AM

Anne-Lise, hi my friend, an imposter would posses all of what you have so perfectly described, all of these traits, an untrue, individual, an imposter who stands before you to scare and confuse you,to lie to you and to create havoc in your life. Tell him to shoo, shoo away. love and blessings, Jennifer.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/24/2024 10:01:00 AM

Wow. Wondering where this one came from? Unusual for you, my sweet friend. expressions of angst with silent reflections on the most distant emotions, flowing with emotions. God bless you sweetheart, love, Gina

Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 3:57:00 AM

Whoa this is powerful dear anne lise, the way your words flow in such a soulful manner truly left me speechless, and it bit so strong. Did you write this while looking at the picture? Your words fit the picture that youv used here too so very well! I love it! The word choices and the depth of emotion’s delivered. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light always

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2024 6:39:00 AM

- No, the poem was written first and the photo came later - Thank you very much for your comment, Ink :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2024 10:36:00 AM

So profound, Anne-Lise. Love the picture you put with the poem as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2024 6:40:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/23/2024 9:50:00 AM

Indeed!~ windows to the soul...to truth. I have a philosophy: if I have to convince myself, bend over backwards finding reasons when making a determination...then, it is probably wrong. Truth is self-evident. Truth needs no affirmation beyond its presence. Excellent write!

Silent One

Date: 3/23/2024 8:41:00 AM

I can feel the angst in your poem and the feelings of betrayal... excellent poetry..

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2024 7:45:00 AM

Th serpent has one final battle, in which he will be defeated, Very nicekly expressed Anne

Mat Ignacio

Date: 3/22/2024 10:02:00 PM

great phrasings here - well expressed

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/22/2024 8:36:00 PM

A marvellous poetic take on a mosaic face Anne-Lise… Beryl

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/22/2024 7:41:00 PM

snakes can be dangerous, dear poet

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:27:00 PM

Your poem read like a beautiful mosaic with outstanding imagery, not easily accomplished in short lines. You did an outstanding job, though. Your poem truly is exquisite and creative. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/22/2024 4:47:00 PM

so touching poem, and beautifully written, all images are perfect and inspiring, i love mosaics, thanks for sharing creativity, this is uplifting have a nice week end