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An Impalpable Journey

An Impalpable Journey The past is where bygone memories linger and diffused as mist The present is where every precious lesson is kept or dismissed The future is where this eternal spirit wanders in vain or in bliss Penned: 2/2/2022 Lake Worth Florida USA

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Valsa George

Date: 2/10/2022 3:14:00 AM

Our past, our present and our future are all interlinked. We cannot separate one from the other and life carries memories of the past, the experiences of the present and the hopes of future.... It is a journey impalpable but moving forward on and on! Great write Anselmo

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/11/2022 9:34:00 PM

I always value your thoughts, thank you Valsa, and they're always spot on! Thanks for the visit...ab

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/8/2022 12:00:00 PM

Ethereal and profound, well crafted. Save the manatees!

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/8/2022 3:42:00 PM

Thank you for the comment and the visit. I think there are organizations here which are trying to conserve and protect the Manatees from becoming an endangered species. Be well...ab

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/6/2022 9:37:00 PM

A very beautifully penned, poetic, rhyme. Take. Care. Shirley

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/7/2022 7:46:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and sharing your positive thought, Shirley!ab

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/5/2022 7:00:00 PM

What a profound poem. I especially love your insight into the 'Present.' I think that you absolutely nailed it. Love the title too: Such an innovative use of the word "Impalpable," Anselmo. Huzzah! ~ Gershon

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/5/2022 8:17:00 PM

Really appreciate your fun Huzzah shout out! and of course the sharing of your perceptions is precious! Todah Rabah Gershon...ab

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/3/2022 5:07:00 PM

You penned a stunning poem, Anselmo. Your wonderful metaphors and fantastic wording shed more enchantment on your poem.

Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/5/2022 7:25:00 PM

Your remarks are truly appreciated Lasaad, and Thanks as always for your sharp insight! Take care...ab