An Impalpable Journey

An Impalpable Journey


            The past is where bygone memories linger and diffused as mist

            The present is where every precious lesson is kept or dismissed

            The future is where this eternal spirit wanders in vain or in bliss









Penned: 2/2/2022
Lake Worth
Florida USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 3:14 AM
Our past, our present and our future are all interlinked. We cannot separate one from the other and life carries memories of the past, the experiences of the present and the hopes of future.... It is a journey impalpable but moving forward on and on! Great write Anselmo
Boles Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 9:34 PM
I always value your thoughts, thank you Valsa, and they're always spot on! Thanks for the visit...ab
Gorelick Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 12:00 PM
Ethereal and profound, well crafted. Save the manatees!
Boles Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Thank you for the comment and the visit. I think there are organizations here which are trying to conserve and protect the Manatees from becoming an endangered species. Be well...ab
Hawkins Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 9:37 PM
A very beautifully penned, poetic, rhyme. Take. Care. Shirley
Boles Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 7:46 PM
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your positive thought, Shirley!ab
Wolf Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 7:00 PM
What a profound poem. I especially love your insight into the 'Present.' I think that you absolutely nailed it. Love the title too: Such an innovative use of the word "Impalpable," Anselmo. Huzzah! ~ Gershon
Boles Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Really appreciate your fun Huzzah shout out! and of course the sharing of your perceptions is precious! Todah Rabah Gershon...ab
Poet Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 5:07 PM
You penned a stunning poem, Anselmo. Your wonderful metaphors and fantastic wording shed more enchantment on your poem.
Boles Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Your remarks are truly appreciated Lasaad, and Thanks as always for your sharp insight! Take care...ab
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