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An Icy Ballet

Went to the park for a WALK today
Froze my bippy, as I TROTTED away
To hell with a saunter
Like a rocket launcher
Was back before I started in this icy ballet

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Silent One

November 3, 2017 at 3:00 PM

You should stay at home when its cold!

Jack Ellison

November 3, 2017 at 3:17 PM

It's not like it's a big surprise!!! It's Johnny Canuck land!

Lim'Rik Flats

November 3, 2017 at 9:25 AM

A walk and trot for our Jack//Heck of a healthy attack//on that belly//of excess jelly//Will bring the svelte star of sillies right back. TROT ON JACQUIE BOI!

Jack Ellison

November 3, 2017 at 9:38 AM

Still losing...... YEE HAW!!! And I have the trots every every day!!!

Russell Sivey

November 3, 2017 at 7:06 AM

Don't you just love these colder temperatures?! I do, I'm so happy right now I could jump up and down...ok I can't do that exactly, my back isn't that good yet! But I am so filled with glee, just like your wondrous poem filled me with an awe inspiring icy conquest, fun my friend! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison

November 3, 2017 at 7:18 AM

Short answer... NO! Had enough of these Canadian winters after 82 years! NASTY!!!

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