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An Ice Cream Day

It's an ice cream day, they say sherbet and orange cream sky, a slow motion dream Sprinkles brighten curlicue clouds Lemonade sun bursts through breathe deep ~ nectar's rendezvous

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Date: 11/21/2023 10:10:00 PM
You are looking at a beautiful sunset while eating a delicious ice cream, Wow!
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Date: 11/21/2023 5:47:00 PM
I love this, sounds like a beautiful sunset!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thanks, BJ. I'll vouch that it's a colorful sunset, for sure...
Date: 11/20/2023 12:23:00 PM
You have one sweet write here. When do we eat??? I love ice cream. Cone or dish with or without sprinkles.........
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:28:00 PM
OK. Paula, I've prepared a 'Koner Dish' for you 'With-Sprinkles-Out.' Enjoy. ~ Gershon
Date: 11/20/2023 10:10:00 AM
Absolutely love the imagery here. I do love a delicious ice cream day filled with the soft colors of the season. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:25:00 PM
Judy, here's to a double scoop of your favorite flavors. ~ gw
Date: 11/20/2023 7:45:00 AM
This feast for the eye poem spritzs like a root beer float. It's a lovely burst of happiness.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:23:00 PM
Ah, 'to spritz like a root bear float.' My idea of Paradise. Thanks, gw
Date: 11/20/2023 3:46:00 AM
Wow, stunning images! 'Curlicue' is quite a new word for me. My eyes are raised high to enjoy that beauty.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:15:00 PM
By your photo-avatar, I imagine that curlicue didn't come up in your English lessons. lol.
Date: 11/20/2023 3:24:00 AM
I scream you scream we all scream for ice cream
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:12:00 PM
Louder -- my hearing aid can't hear you...
Date: 11/20/2023 12:39:00 AM
Good ice-cream description. Nicely written. Well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/21/2023 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanette! :) Gershon

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