Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

An Ice Cream Day

   It's an ice cream day, they say
   sherbet and orange cream
     sky, a slow motion dream

   Sprinkles brighten curlicue clouds 
   Lemonade sun bursts through
     breathe deep ~ nectar's rendezvous

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Shirley Hawkins November 21, 2023 at 10:10 PM You are looking at a beautiful sunset while eating a delicious ice cream, Wow!

Bj Legros Kelley November 21, 2023 at 5:47 PM I love this, sounds like a beautiful sunset! Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:31 PM Thanks, BJ. I'll vouch that it's a colorful sunset, for sure...

Paula Goldsmith November 20, 2023 at 12:23 PM You have one sweet write here. When do we eat??? I love ice cream. Cone or dish with or without sprinkles......... Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:28 PM OK. Paula, I've prepared a 'Koner Dish' for you 'With-Sprinkles-Out.' Enjoy. ~ Gershon

Judy Ball November 20, 2023 at 10:10 AM Absolutely love the imagery here. I do love a delicious ice cream day filled with the soft colors of the season. Well done my friend. God Bless, JB Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:25 PM Judy, here's to a double scoop of your favorite flavors. ~ gw

Hilda Greenhough November 20, 2023 at 7:45 AM This feast for the eye poem spritzs like a root beer float. It's a lovely burst of happiness. Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:23 PM Ah, 'to spritz like a root bear float.' My idea of Paradise. Thanks, gw

Valsa George November 20, 2023 at 3:46 AM Wow, stunning images! 'Curlicue' is quite a new word for me. My eyes are raised high to enjoy that beauty. Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:15 PM By your photo-avatar, I imagine that curlicue didn't come up in your English lessons. lol.

John Lawless November 20, 2023 at 3:24 AM I scream you scream we all scream for ice cream Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:12 PM Louder -- my hearing aid can't hear you...

Daisy Meadows November 20, 2023 at 12:39 AM Good ice-cream description. Nicely written. Well done. Gershon Wolf November 21, 2023 at 7:11 PM Thank you so much, Jeanette! :) Gershon