An Extra Mile

Roy went an extra mile last week
while traveling from Stoke to Leek
by high-speed rail (First-Class, off-peak).

In truth, a little more;

It was an extra sixty-three
he ended up in Oswestry;
decided to explore and see;

He’d never been before.

He saw the castle and the keep;
It is one way to travel cheap;
to board a train then fall asleep;

(the secret’s not to snore).
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:24 PM
This made me chuckle, Terry! Great write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:52 AM
Thank you Kim
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Thank you Sara
Alex Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 6:28 AM
"the secret’s not to snore" - Interesting. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Thank you so much
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:32 AM
I really enjoyed this write, Terry. "Love the ending" Well done, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
Miller Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Thank you Charles, for the kind comment, the placement, and for running the contest.
Bowring Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 11:06 AM
A fun read Terry. Really enjoyed it thank you. Reminded me of late night runs coming back from London that I used to do years ago. Warmest wishes.
Miller Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Oh me too; home on weekend leave Friday nights up from Pompey (after a few, and many years ago) we got to writing the names of our station on a notepad and pinning it to our chest. Thank you for visit.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Have you ever done it Terry? I have, but not 63 miles !! Oh but don't worry, I don't think I snored. Terry-ific poem. A fun read. BOL in the extra mile contest. This one will do well. Cheers SV
Miller Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 1:41 AM
I have SV and longer than 63 thank you for your visit and kind comments
Stebbings Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Very good, Terry, love the humour. // Barry
Miller Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Thank you Barry
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