An Excavation

For good foundations, one must excavate -
removing rocks or muck or sediment.
Without this process, how can one create
a solid base on an impediment?
“Build not on sand,” a Holy One once said.
(I paraphrase; I think you get the gist.)
Remove the dirt and grit inside your head.
You cannot have a good life if a tryst
with things immoral occupies your time.
Some habits too ingrained require a blast
to get them out! But even if some crime
has weighed you down, this need not have to last.
When things must go, imagine them as rocks,
and excavate those dreadful stumbling blocks.


July 3, 2021 for Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 4 Poetry Contest
sorry I keep making typos all the time!!
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative Excavation story/write. Love your line, "Remove the dirt and grit inside your head." So True. Bad habits do need a blast. Please, only good habits here. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:33 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Watt Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 6:04 PM
I like the hope implied by these encouraging words, especially line 12. Your enjambment talents are alive and well, as is your sonnet mastery. Well done, my friend
Faulkner Avatar
July 14, 2021 at 1:38 PM
Wise words here, and yes I think once you clean out the dirt and grit in your head your thoughts will be clean and free! Should do well in the contest!
Jayasankar Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 3:24 AM
An inspiring Sonnet my friend... how important isn't it.. to have a good and strong foundation.. to build anything that is GOOD... Last two lines my fav... Best wishes dear... Hugs... ~ Ani
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 10:36 PM
A nice analogy of excavating negative thoughts from life, well said, Andrea:) a solid foundation must be built on rock:) p.s: it's excavation:)
Brul Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 8:26 AM
A thought provoking piece! Goodluck in the sure win..
Proxenos Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:30 AM
Stumbling blokes can build up if one allows them to, clear the mind, of anything unkind. Be rid of things that you find are negative, find positivity and be a rock as you so rightly say, and greet a new no stumbling day! Like your approach to this theme/topic. Hoping for a 1st for you, cannot see that it should be anything else! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:16 PM
We have lost much of what Our Lord taught us. Build on solid ground. But we never learn. Gappy anniversary. Hugs.
Laurie Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Hello Andrea …. once negativity infects the mind, there is problems on the horizon. You wrote this well Andrea - Lindsay
Hankins Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Such good advice, Andrea. I had thoughts of the collapse of the Miami condo building while reading your fine poem. No, it's always a mistake to build on the sand, whether a building or logic.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Liked the way you compared excavation of mind to excavation of rocks. I wish I could write sonnets like this. All the best for contest. Enjoy your weekend
Lawless Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:47 AM
an intriguing sonnet Andrea...enjoyed its subtle message
Cunningham Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:18 AM
Love your take on the contest theme Andrea with a powerful message. Best of luck. Tom
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