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An Evil Eye

Hurricanes twirl like a kaleidoscope, chaotic fragments crash in pewter sky, perpetual unstable isotopes create apocalypse on land once dry. Cacophony of wind does shear the hope to quell hysteria in waters high. The spiraled carnage in the wind does fly outside the hollow of an evil eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/19/2017 1:13:00 PM
Great choice of words and self expression Dale:-)
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Date: 9/10/2017 6:13:00 PM
I like what you did with the words. Great title! Seems like we had the same idea for a topic, LOL. Love the Ottava Rima. Good luck in the contest, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/10/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Date: 9/8/2017 2:02:00 PM
Powerful poetry, Dale. Great description of a hurricane. Wonderful Ottava rima poem. Love and joy always.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/8/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie.
Date: 9/7/2017 4:36:00 PM
Wow what a poem Dale. Amazing.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 9/7/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi.

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