An Evil Eye

Hurricanes twirl like a kaleidoscope,
chaotic fragments crash in pewter sky,
perpetual unstable isotopes

create apocalypse on land once dry.
Cacophony of wind does shear the hope
to quell hysteria in waters high.

The spiraled carnage in the wind does fly
outside the hollow of an evil eye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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O.J. Hunt Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Great choice of words and self expression Dale:-)
Krampe Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:13 PM
I like what you did with the words. Great title! Seems like we had the same idea for a topic, LOL. Love the Ottava Rima. Good luck in the contest, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 6:27 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 2:02 PM
Powerful poetry, Dale. Great description of a hurricane. Wonderful Ottava rima poem. Love and joy always.
Cozart Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, Freddie.
Sands Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Wow what a poem Dale. Amazing.
Cozart Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi.
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