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An Evening Walk Cut Short

Autumn sky glows yellow against blue hue sky; turns windy, rainy a long languorous day. Swirls of fresh intoxicating aria. midmorning showers rootless lingering rainbow~ scent of petrichor Outdoors allure afresh, stunning once again. Sun kissed fragrant richer fruitful harvest fields. Woods once rich with leaves fall round and round with wings. quenching nature's thirst harmonious double arch~ whole world auspicious An evening walk to the pond a calming sense; near the bank we saw large bear paws sunk deeply into the mud, quietly cutting our walk short. black bear foraging spawning fish bantering play~ heart beats in slumber 9/7/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Date: 9/22/2020 11:29:00 AM
Very beautiful and captivating, Eve. Many congrat's on your win. ~Elaine
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Date: 9/17/2020 8:51:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Eve, a pure pleasure to read. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/17/2020 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your story/poem. Guess bear prints would send you running. I would love to hold a baby bear. Enjoy your win..............
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Date: 9/16/2020 11:32:00 PM
Lovely write.. Congrats on your wonderful win Eve..
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Date: 9/7/2020 11:46:00 PM
The bigger the bear paw print, the faster we head back home! Lovely nature write, Eve, yet again!
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Date: 9/7/2020 6:56:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2020 5:16:00 AM
Beautifully done, my friend. I enjoyed it so much. I wish you all the best for the contest. God bless you always :)
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Date: 9/6/2020 10:54:00 PM
what super imagery Eve and I love the haiku, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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