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An Evening Walk

Restless is the evening's song, so eager to release the throng of scented jasmine's sweet sachet. A first star takes my breath away... while clouds pile high like pink parfait with fringes gold in soft bouquets. Two lonely spruces thrash and sway in orchestrated breeze ballet, while dappled in the shadow's play, a weary earth turns shades of gray My silhouette is growing long..... as moonlight begs to come along.
_____________________ Now Entered in PD's Contest: Never Before in a Contest: #7 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Duo Rhyme Contest: Lovely invention of poems by Mary Port: Sponsored By Andrea Detrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/25/2014 7:42:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. Oh the gems we miss! Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2014 6:43:00 PM
Oh I love that the clouds pile high like a pink parfait, Your mind sees things so terrifically I love your unique imagery! Grats on first my friend:)
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Date: 6/25/2014 12:11:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a great win with a magnificently poem!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 10:50:00 AM
This tremendous Carrie..love the imagery... Congrats Tim
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Date: 6/25/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thank you for the great surprise, PD, I did not expect to see! Big congratulations to all your winners, with these great contributions to your contest! Thank you!
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Date: 6/25/2014 7:01:00 AM
COngratulations CArrie..:D the beat and whyme the feelings you aroused and the marvelous imagery you created. :) Love it.. :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:36:00 AM
'My silhouette is growing long'.....What a line, what a poem. You never cease to amaze...
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:54:00 AM
Great imagery, Carrie, and flowing rhyme; the last 2 lines make for a strong conclusion. Congrats on your top placing. // paul
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:33:00 AM
A beautiful, enchanting piece. Congrats Carrie! ^_^
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:26:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/24/2014 11:11:00 PM
Utterly lovely and transcendent. Congratulations and all best wishes.
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:28:00 PM
Good evening Carrie, I enjoyed this short poem, awesome imagery, ... Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 5/30/2014 4:59:00 AM
Beautiful, Carrie. Lainie
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Date: 8/10/2012 1:29:00 PM
A late congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:40:00 AM
A well deserved win for you in the Duo-Rhyme contest. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2012 5:56:00 PM
Hi, Sweet Beautiful Carrie Richards ~ Another Fantastic Picturesque Moment, By The Most Beautiful Of Gifted Girls ~ What A Wonderful Walk ... My Luv, Rachel *
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Date: 8/6/2012 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for such a beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/5/2012 1:56:00 PM
What a beautiful picture.... Congratulations on this well deserved first place. Lee
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Date: 8/4/2012 10:54:00 PM
Carrie, this is an Incredible write! I love the beautiful imagery of night...congrats on your first place win. I am honored to share the spot with you (your poem is so much better)! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/4/2012 7:21:00 AM
Dear Carrie - This is so lovely it is beyond comments. I am just sitting here drinking it in. Congratulations on your win. love, Kathy
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Date: 8/4/2012 6:23:00 AM
It felt like a Van Gogh! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/4/2012 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie a well deserved win.xx
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Date: 8/4/2012 2:05:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win, it is just beautiful, a well deserved top spot...David
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:15:00 PM
This is WONDERFUL Carrie and I am so glad to see it take top honors! Congratulations. I haven't been able to be here at PS very much lately with my daughter's two operations and caring for my g.daughter who was 5 months old yesterday. Sure do miss all the beautiful poetry. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/3/2012 6:45:00 PM
Also, the way you ended it. Endings are very important with me and you had one of the best pair of final lines in the contest.
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