An Evening Stroll

In the cool of eventide
She took a stroll outside
And as she gazed up at the sky
She caught a glimpse of stars on high
And upon one she made a wish
In wonderment and silent bliss

Then she remembered that old  lullaby
 About  those diamonds in the sky --....
"Twinkle twinkle  little star
How I wonder what you are".....
She wondered then, if they, so far
Thought that she, too, was a star

But the moon looked on jealously
asking, "Why does no one wish on me"
She thought about it for a while
And told the moon "Just shine and smile
For  you have captured many hearts
With the soft light that you  impart"

The moon smiled back,  with a wink and a glance
And  then he asked her,   "Shall we dance?"
And in the heavens they waltzed so far
Where she took her place among the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kimathi Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 6:05 AM
Congrats Joseph, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
La France Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 9:22 PM
this is so beautifully penned and congrats on your win in the contest
A  Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Joseph Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
May Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thank you for my placement Skat...
A   Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:00 PM
joesph, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
Lindley Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Congrats on your win Joseph. This is a beautifully written piece and a pleasure to read...
A. Sharma Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Lovely write n win Joseph.. big congrats!
A  Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 11:50 PM
joseph, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
Roper Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
Gorelick Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 1:55 PM
What a dance! Congrats on your win. BG
Haight Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:27 AM
A wonderful tale of fantasy on an evening stroll, Joseph. I enjoyed reading your poem, and congrats on your fine win. Sandra
A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 7:52 PM
Joseph, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
Allison Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 12:31 PM
I loved this enchanting poem, Joseph. It has nice rhythm and rhyme to it. Congrats on a first place win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on your Joseph
Callus Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 4:47 PM
I love the idea of dancing with the moon among the stars. Congrats on a lovely win, Joseph! // paul
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 10:38 AM
You painted a wonderful picture ... such a beautiful dance Joseph! Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 1:01 AM
JOSEPH,, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~
Haick Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 9:29 PM
A true delight, Joseph. Thank you for the visit! Hope your week is going well. x xAnnalise
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 3:10 PM
I love the whimsical feel to this Joseph most enjoyable read Shadow x smile hug
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 1:14 PM
ahhh, this is so sweet, making a little story of it. ME LIKES
May Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Andrea...always good to see you
Williams Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 12:32 PM
HI Joseph I like this a lot...David
May Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Thank you David..I appreciate your comments
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January 26, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Ahhh!! A new God and Goddest myth is born..Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn.......Yes, I guess bird stuffed with cornbread would be almost like turkey stuffed with cornbread dressing..I liked your sense of humor..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
May Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Sara...I like your sense of humor too..
A  Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 9:06 PM
it is lovely, Joseph. A lovely dance among the stars. SKAT
May Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Thank you Skat...always good to see you
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