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An Evening Stroll

In the cool of eventide She took a stroll outside And as she gazed up at the sky She caught a glimpse of stars on high And upon one she made a wish In wonderment and silent bliss Then she remembered that old lullaby About those diamonds in the sky --.... "Twinkle twinkle little star How I wonder what you are"..... She wondered then, if they, so far Thought that she, too, was a star But the moon looked on jealously asking, "Why does no one wish on me" She thought about it for a while And told the moon "Just shine and smile For you have captured many hearts With the soft light that you impart" The moon smiled back, with a wink and a glance And then he asked her, "Shall we dance?" And in the heavens they waltzed so far Where she took her place among the stars

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Date: 5/9/2016 6:05:00 AM
Congrats Joseph, for your WIN with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/8/2016 9:22:00 PM
this is so beautifully penned and congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/8/2016 6:18:00 PM
Joseph Congrats on your awesome win! Stop by my latest blog "Making A Difference." Enjoy and celebrate this win. With Love **SKAT**
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Date: 5/9/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Skat...
Date: 12/22/2015 4:00:00 PM
joesph, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 11:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win Joseph. This is a beautifully written piece and a pleasure to read...
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:36:00 AM
Lovely write n win Joseph.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2015 11:50:00 PM
joseph, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:23:00 PM
Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:55:00 PM
What a dance! Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:27:00 AM
A wonderful tale of fantasy on an evening stroll, Joseph. I enjoyed reading your poem, and congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:52:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:39:00 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/9/2015 3:27:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2015 12:31:00 PM
I loved this enchanting poem, Joseph. It has nice rhythm and rhyme to it. Congrats on a first place win!
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Date: 12/2/2014 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your Joseph
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Date: 11/30/2014 4:47:00 PM
I love the idea of dancing with the moon among the stars. Congrats on a lovely win, Joseph! // paul
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Date: 11/30/2014 10:38:00 AM
You painted a wonderful picture ... such a beautiful dance Joseph! Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:01:00 AM
JOSEPH,, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:29:00 PM
A true delight, Joseph. Thank you for the visit! Hope your week is going well. x xAnnalise
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Date: 1/29/2014 3:10:00 PM
I love the whimsical feel to this Joseph most enjoyable read Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/26/2014 1:14:00 PM
ahhh, this is so sweet, making a little story of it. ME LIKES
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Joseph May
Date: 1/26/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...always good to see you
Date: 1/26/2014 12:32:00 PM
HI Joseph I like this a lot...David
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Joseph May
Date: 1/26/2014 2:07:00 PM
Thank you David..I appreciate your comments
Date: 1/26/2014 7:07:00 AM
Ahhh!! A new God and Goddest myth is born..Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn.......Yes, I guess bird stuffed with cornbread would be almost like turkey stuffed with cornbread dressing..I liked your sense of humor..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2014 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Sara...I like your sense of humor too..
Date: 1/25/2014 9:06:00 PM
it is lovely, Joseph. A lovely dance among the stars. SKAT
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Joseph May
Date: 1/26/2014 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Skat...always good to see you

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