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An Evening Composition

The noise of the day has subsided and folded into a quiet under the soft covers of a July evening. The eyes seem to resist the particular and instead focus on nothing but the sum - the glow from shore lights smudged on water, the dark sky powdered with translucent clouds and the faint filaments of stars strung out overhead. Tonight, I don't want the granular detail of things to steal my attention but to enjoy the blending, the stand back meld of colors, of each stroke, forming a picture transcending its parts. I want to feel the evening being put together into a boundless whole, to be beyond the smallness of myself and be absorbed totally into the mystery of the composition

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Date: 7/19/2025 4:55:00 PM
a pleasant read, Paul. Sometimes, I, too, don't want the grandeur of things to distract me. I especially liked to be beyond the smallness of myself and be absorbed totally into the mystery of the composition Faving...enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Sara for your positive feedback.. Regards Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 8:58:00 AM
Just let it be comes to mind, relax and watch it unfold and just happen! ....a beautifully composed poem Paul that starts with such captivating and inviting first lines! Another fine Paul write!! Debx
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Date: 7/21/2025 2:36:00 AM
We are besties already …..coffee and biscuits…..and a poem or two!!
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:27:00 AM
So pleased by your visit ...coffee and an Anzac biscuit waiting for you my dear friend. Thankyou heaps for your kind words. Fancy an Iced Vo Vo...( do they still make them ? ) Cheers Deb....
Date: 7/19/2025 7:56:00 AM
THIS MUST BE FAVED....as it provides an unexpected entry into a short meditative state...thank you for the poem and its subtle invitation to "come hither"...
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:19:00 AM
Your kind words have caused a sudden flush to the face...a sincere thankyou John for such positive feedback. Valued...your words matter. Cheers....Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 3:53:00 AM
This is amazing, thank you for sharing your talent today, have a blessed day dear poet !
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:15:00 AM
Thankyou dear MR for reading the poem and being so gracious in your comments....very much valued. Blessings reciprocated....regards, Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 3:46:00 AM
Being unfocused can give to us a new perspective. It could be a blessing not to home in on details... less stress and more joy to just let things be and enjoy the blur that veils what we'd rather not see. If that makes sense.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:11:00 AM
A bit like some impressionist paintings, up close you see only blobs and swirls of paint...stand back and a masterpiece comes into focus. Many thanks Lin for sharing your observations. Always a treat. Take care, Paul

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