An Evening Composition


The noise of the day
has subsided and folded
into a quiet
under the soft covers
of a July evening.
The eyes seem to resist
the particular and instead
focus on nothing 
but the sum - the glow 
from shore lights 
smudged on water,
the dark sky powdered
with translucent clouds
and the faint filaments 
of stars strung out overhead.

Tonight, I don't want 
the granular detail of things
to steal my attention
but to enjoy the blending,
the stand back meld
of colors, of each stroke,
forming a picture transcending
its parts. I want to feel
the evening being
put together
into a boundless whole,
to be beyond 
the smallness of myself
and be absorbed totally
into the mystery
of the composition

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Date: 8/17/2025 1:08:00 PM
The tranquility of the environment and the serenity of your inner mindset is captured effortlessly here by your wonderful words Paul. Cheers - Gary
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/17/2025 9:40:00 PM
Much appreciate your comments Gary....pleased to hear that the poem conveyed such feelings. Sincere thanks for taking the time, a vitamin shot to the creative vein. Take care Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 4:55:00 PM
a pleasant read, Paul. Sometimes, I, too, don't want the grandeur of things to distract me. I especially liked to be beyond the smallness of myself and be absorbed totally into the mystery of the composition Faving...enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Sara for your positive feedback.. Regards Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 8:58:00 AM
Just let it be comes to mind, relax and watch it unfold and just happen! ....a beautifully composed poem Paul that starts with such captivating and inviting first lines! Another fine Paul write!! Debx
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Date: 7/21/2025 2:36:00 AM
We are besties already …..coffee and biscuits…..and a poem or two!!
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:27:00 AM
So pleased by your visit ...coffee and an Anzac biscuit waiting for you my dear friend. Thankyou heaps for your kind words. Fancy an Iced Vo Vo...( do they still make them ? ) Cheers Deb....
Date: 7/19/2025 7:56:00 AM
THIS MUST BE FAVED....as it provides an unexpected entry into a short meditative state...thank you for the poem and its subtle invitation to "come hither"...
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:19:00 AM
Your kind words have caused a sudden flush to the face...a sincere thankyou John for such positive feedback. Valued...your words matter. Cheers....Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 3:53:00 AM
This is amazing, thank you for sharing your talent today, have a blessed day dear poet !
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:15:00 AM
Thankyou dear MR for reading the poem and being so gracious in your comments....very much valued. Blessings reciprocated....regards, Paul
Date: 7/19/2025 3:46:00 AM
Being unfocused can give to us a new perspective. It could be a blessing not to home in on details... less stress and more joy to just let things be and enjoy the blur that veils what we'd rather not see. If that makes sense.
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:11:00 AM
A bit like some impressionist paintings, up close you see only blobs and swirls of paint...stand back and a masterpiece comes into focus. Many thanks Lin for sharing your observations. Always a treat. Take care, Paul
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