An Evening

Cattle backs to home
Birds chirping for evening nest
Your hassle sizzles
Sun isn’t duty-free being
Moon shows beauty unity



-April 03, 2019, Chattogram
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Krutsinger Avatar
April 4, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Your imagery shows me a moon-lit night night, which is "hassel-free", where every animal is settling down, for the night. Nicely done.
Thayer Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Nice Mahtab, "cattle backs to home"...I can just see the cattle walking as the sun sets, going home. Vickie
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