An Etheree Expression of Love

Lis and Me

I
picture
Lis and me
In twenty years,
she, a grandma, and
I, a great-grandmother
perhaps!  We’re on a warm beach.
She’s sipping juice while I’m, instead,
munching on a snack.  Naturally,
we’ll be doing what we do best. . . talking.
We’ve never lacked for things to chat about: 
our joys and woes, our kids and pets, 
God, husbands, diets, politics,
plastic surgeries we’d hoped 
to get; (If we got them,
are we now content?)
On that beach, “old”
friends we’ll be,
Lis and
me. 

I wrote this back in 2008 when my best friend was this woman
named Lis. However, after 12 years of a very deep friendship,
she tossed it to the curb. I found this poem tonight in old files
of mine and was reminded of my love for her. I will always love her, 
but I think the future we dreamed of will never come to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 6:23 PM
This is so bittersweet and touching, I'm feeling it on many levels because I can relate to being thrown to the curb. Sometimes you don't even know the curb is there until you hit it. Lovely sentiments and her loss! Hugs ... CayCay
Walker Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
So sad when I know how much you treasured her friendship and she tossed it like it was nothing.
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Yes, Jenny, she had been SUCH a good and generous friend until that crazy little thing happened. I can't believe she became so indignant. I wonder if you can even see these replies I make to you. I will have to ask you in hotmail.
Austin Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 9:53 AM
Sorry old friends are hard to come by, but the world changes fast these days Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 2:53 PM
- Sad, Andrea - Friends for a reason, friends for a while and friends for life ... some come and some go - Winnie the Pooh has a lot of wise saying about friendship: * - How long will we be friends, Pooh? - (Piglet ask) - Even further, said Pooh :) - * - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 12:18 PM
So sorry to read your footnote, alas... Don't care what anybody says, I STILL LOV YA!!!
Inman Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 10:05 AM
I great Etheree with a beautiful sentiment Andrea. So sad to think that the friendship is now gone. Someone not long ago reminded me that we should remember the beauty and not dwell on the loss. By the way which Haiku did you enter in the contest?
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:04 AM
I can relate Andrea and it leaves us always feeling puzzled and sad. A great double Etheree! 7 ; )
Wolves Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Death of friendship is never easy to deal with. However by posting this you have proven to be the better woman. The better friend, and much more. Nice one....
Vinson Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Oh Andrea, that is so sad. Why such things happen....
B. Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Andrea this is a beautiful heartfelt poem. It's sad when friendship ends abruptly. I hope one day you will reunite. :)
Pinet Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 5:04 PM
Your structure is very good and the theme flows throughout the work. Your word choice is good and the message sent is strong and emotional. A good soul inspiring piece that’s drenched in love, being pulled along by a poetic current of beautiful thoughts that end on a note of possibilities. Emile.
Lawless Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 3:57 PM
A sad footnote to a beautiful poem. I an always awed by the ease with which you write the Etheree form.
Anish Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Beautiful expression of friendship here. Sometimes we lose track of good friends and it hurts! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Mahakul Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Beautification of poem of pictures of emotion amazes mind and this expresses life's status very well. Love builds beautiful relationship. An interesting poem is shared on really.
Peranteau Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 12:28 AM
This was a heartwarming write dear poet. Have a wonderful week Andrea...much love, james
Ricci Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Hello Andrea. Format aside loss and reflections always make marvelous poetry and thoughts. Your entry has such promise of the future. Sometimes there are no answers as to why lives go in different directions and change. Well done
Roper Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Awe, nice thoughts for the future .. Sorry about the friendship .
Ball Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 7:59 PM
Excellent Andrea. Sometimes relationships we think are unsinkable suddenly fall apart and we never know what happened. I think this is something most of us have experienced. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
Smith Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 7:47 PM
It is bittersweet that friendship so tight would vanish...maybe one day your friendship will be rekindled...this shows your heart Andrea.
Horn Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 7:33 PM
e·the·re·al [?'THire?l] ADJECTIVE extremely delicate and light in a way that seems too perfect for this world: "her ethereal beauty." It does happen but only God knows why. I considered my two friends more successful then I ever was and a jealous resentment came between us. Jim
Marie Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 7:27 PM
I once read that we don't have enough room to keep in touch with every person we meet throughout our lives. Some cross our paths to teach us, some to learn from us. Your poem reminded me of this as it feels so sad when friendship ends, and your words are so heartfelt, it is bittersweet when it goes awry, yet the memories remain forever. A lovely Etheree Andrea :-), 7+ blessings, lynn
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