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In the night sky I admire the moon, and the moon's ever starry friend; they travel together and are attune, above in the dark they suspend; but I will become that star one day soon. Oh, have found out that this is not a star, that it is the planet Venus; so, on my death she will go in a jar, this will take a plan genius; and will be hard to do from so afar. Will appeal to the landlord of the sky, and with respect will show my need; for that perfect spot with a tear and sigh, oh, he offered me an eternal deed; that will commence the day I die. When poets seek above I will glimmer, and shine there beside the moon bright; a forever, ever glow and glitter, and my star will whisper at night; yes, I will always be the star bigger. "I love you to the moon and back, my name is Dreamer, find me on nights black." ________________________ November 8, 2020 Poetry/Quintain Sicilian/An Eternal Star Beside the Moon Copyright Protected, ID 11-1303-071-08 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, There is a Star with my Name on it, sponsor, Silent One, Judged 11/12/20 Second Place

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Date: 11/12/2020 8:12:00 PM
A vivid and beautiful poem, Constance. Your starlit artistry inspires my heart's imagination. Congratulations for your win with this excellent poem in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/13/2020 4:42:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the compliment , comment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/12/2020 8:51:00 AM
Lovely poem.. when poets seek above, I will glimmer... They glimmer for so many poets.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 11/13/2020 4:43:00 AM
Silent, thank you for another inspiring contest theme and for my placement and thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/11/2020 11:11:00 AM
This is a well-structured and well-defined creative piece, Constance!!
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Date: 11/11/2020 11:26:00 AM
Newton, thanks for the visit and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/8/2020 2:07:00 PM
Beautiful, vividly descriptive, appealing poem, Constance. Janice
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Date: 11/9/2020 6:48:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the visit and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/8/2020 4:25:00 AM
Simply love your quote and the creativity discovered within your heart with this original verse and vision. Love it. God bless you always sweet lady
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Date: 11/8/2020 6:55:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the visit and compliment on my poem, God bless you too _Constance

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