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An Epitaph

Lo, here lies poor Abdul Malik Who built his life brick by brick But, oh, death came rather quick and whisked it away with a flick; God, he was sturdy, not at all sick, Why then did fate play such a trick?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/8/2013 1:16:00 PM
Hurry and finish what you start and don't leave! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM
Good morning, Abdul,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2012 5:29:00 AM
Good morning, Abdul,, A nice warm congratulations for the very nice win in Rick's "Any 5 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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Date: 12/23/2012 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on another winning spot Abdul xx
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Date: 12/22/2012 5:23:00 PM
wow, what a worthy win. COngrats, i love this.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/22/2012 6:12:00 PM
Thanks a lot. This is one poem I wrote with all my heart.
Date: 12/22/2012 2:55:00 PM
Exquisite epitaph and an applause for this awesome placement!!! gwendolen
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/22/2012 3:12:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 12/22/2012 1:31:00 PM
Congrats on win, now that the World didn't end on the 21st you will have a chance to finish!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/22/2012 3:12:00 PM
Ha, Man! I so wanted it to end. Now I have to rewrite my Epitaph!!!!lol. Thanks

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