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An Epic Sojourn - haiku

ancient boat comes cold paddle slips into coma sea curls wet, alive

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Date: 4/3/2020 6:41:00 PM
great use of imagery, nice work!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/4/2020 3:00:00 AM
Hi Raul, Thank you! I appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed it. Earl
Date: 4/3/2020 3:30:00 PM
such vivid imagery earl I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/4/2020 2:57:00 AM
Hi Jan. Thank you for noticing. The ingredients used on this one seemed to have worked out just right this time. I worry about using too much spice in creating my haiku adventures. Take care, Earl