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An Epic Sojourn - Haiku

ancient boat comes cold paddle slips into coma sea curls wet, alive

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/3/2020 6:41:00 PM

great use of imagery, nice work!

Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/4/2020 3:00:00 AM

Hi Raul, Thank you! I appreciate your comments. Glad you enjoyed it. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2020 3:30:00 PM

such vivid imagery earl I especially love the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker
Date: 4/4/2020 2:57:00 AM

Hi Jan. Thank you for noticing. The ingredients used on this one seemed to have worked out just right this time. I worry about using too much spice in creating my haiku adventures. Take care, Earl