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An enlightened rose

a thorn on the stem of rose in repose pricked the finger of her deluded lover yet with her last breaths she exuded love mood and mode acceptant free from bondage resplendent in fragrance of her dying petals recognising the source as breath of God

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Date: 10/11/2024 11:15:00 PM
Ah, made me read, reread and reread. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/5/2024 10:52:00 AM
Woww, this is such an emotive and heartfelt piece... describing how unknowingly we may hurt others and also drown in the destiny of decay ourselves... even though there's purity in our hearts, but what the fate holds for us still remains unknown. In the end, we can only find peace in the divine aura of the Almighty.. Beautifully described with so many delicate feelings.
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Date: 10/5/2024 6:36:00 PM
Ah, your translation reads better than the original, remain blessed, Hiya

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