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liquor crushed ice an effervescent tonic an engaging libation a crystal glass an empty mass a looking glass an engaging lass a reflection fills the flask an hourglass figure smooth as glass a view deep a deep view a hot and hard jigger an episodic embrace of the stem a nicely paced repetitive stroked type grip measured a high pitch pleasured note of delight a charge and another... ...and another... ...and... …..... ...a spill... ...a swig... ...a swallow an emphatic gush a coupled roast an orgasmic toast a sexual rush.
31~10~2014

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Date: 4/13/2015 6:16:00 PM
still love this one of yours, ARmand. Delicioso!! JUst wanted to stop and say hi. My time is very short today. I went to a vietnamese restaurant and it was pretty good. (Monday is lunch day with the ladies!!)
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Date: 11/2/2014 11:01:00 AM
Oh My! But an amazing, inventive... and mind blowing write.
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Date: 11/1/2014 11:25:00 AM
Maurice . . . This one's a Keeper my good man!! You never fail in your poetic efforts to entertain this particular reader with the utter ingenuity and originality of your expressions and thoughts. (Lickher = Liquor = Lickher.) My artful indeed!! This one's a 7++ in my book and a most definite FAV. Outstanding!! Cheers and Spill Ink Always!! Gary
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Date: 11/1/2014 9:22:00 AM
You have quite the way with words my friend. This should make quite the splash!
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Date: 10/31/2014 9:01:00 PM
A very unusual one!! I love the word play with liquor and the sexual overtones implied by the title of the piece. Some of the lines were stunning in this one: the description in the first verse, and this particular line really struck me: an episodic embrace of the stem. oooh, seems sensually symbolic!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 9:21:00 PM
I could definetly improve on this one but I am working on some complex forms right now. I would like to write two poems that I felt were up to par with great poets like yourself. Just the two and then I am going to retire from poetry. Write a short film, a screenplay and a couple of plays.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 9:16:00 PM
yes it is all about sex, a thinly veiled erotic write.
Date: 10/31/2014 6:53:00 PM
I think you got it right but I'm no mathematician
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 7:35:00 PM
HAHAHAHA!
Date: 10/31/2014 6:00:00 PM
A interesting work my friend, thanks for the congrads on my ghost train poem, and poet for the day write, cheri
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 7:34:00 PM
thank you cheri.
Date: 10/31/2014 2:15:00 PM
Liquour, liqueur or licker but not like you have!!!! Great descriptive and sensual write my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 7:30:00 PM
HAHAHAHA!!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/31/2014 6:48:00 PM
Lickher in the front pokher in the rear
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 6:09:00 PM
LOL Maurice I think people know your sense of fun already - please don't change it for me - if you feel it may offend alter it to a spelling you are happy with:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 6:04:00 PM
I got scared it would offend people. For you I will change it back.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 5:31:00 PM
you changed your title - pah!
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 2:31:00 PM
I did read it Maurice ..... that's why I made that word last lol - hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/31/2014 2:28:00 PM
You sure it's not lick her? I mean read the poem...

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