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An Ending

the anger the intense shout in the night the look the eyes black without light when the eyes are so dark and cold thus is the end of love as it all enfolds there is a feeling from the frightened breast Nothing now left to be guessed illness and anger, evolved into rage, brain worn from illness, fear and age

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Date: 4/21/2021 10:52:00 AM
Very moving poem ~ the rage is tangible
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Date: 4/21/2021 9:51:00 AM
Wanted to make sure, this is not about me, have seen this over the years in different places and ways and wanted to do a poem and try some couplets.
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Date: 4/21/2021 9:13:00 AM
Poor Linda. But with a little patience you would suffer less.
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