An Ending

the anger the intense shout in the night
the look the eyes black without light
when the eyes are so dark and cold
thus is the end of love as it all enfolds
there is a feeling from the frightened breast
Nothing now left to be guessed
illness and anger, evolved into rage, 
brain worn from illness, fear and age
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Very moving poem ~ the rage is tangible
Milgate Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Wanted to make sure, this is not about me, have seen this over the years in different places and ways and wanted to do a poem and try some couplets.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Poor Linda. But with a little patience you would suffer less.
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