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I was a sophisticated, world class traveler, like merry wind in green trees. I had seen hottest deserts and rain forests, where songs will never cease. I had traveled by planes and by trains, by luxury ship, fast car and camel; And I had roamed mountains and valleys, like the comet, taking a gamble. I had visited myriad cultured nations, meeting diverse, interesting people, Like divers beautiful, sultry colors, with which the artist stains gilded easel. Since I'd had various adventures, I was anxious that one day I'd be bored, And I'd lose my greatest pleasure, like the turquoise sky, sunshine ignored. When my feet had finally found familiar home, it slowly filled with friends; Like jade waves on fairer shores of finally, where the fraught journey ends. Fragrant fields fashioned fictitious, forever moments, on green 4th of July, When favorite family joined the festival, in the wake of crimson butterflies. I lived in the house of wanderlust, and of redbirds flying past my windows, In hues of purple, yellow, blue and jade, seeking nearby, golden tomorrows. Strange, shifting shadows dappled sidewalks, along my star-struck street; With endless darkness and light competition, in summertime's county seat. Noon neighbors were never negligent, with local news and nutty brownies, On glazed afternoons of ease, as scarlet woodpeckers tap danced in trees. Swank summer was in little things, like swift swings and vibrant balloons, As red begonias bedazzled startling shadows, of dawn golds and maroons. Chickadees were in wispy smoke trees, chirping in stunning, pink blooms; And sullen, sultry wind had sudden tantrums, then settled in sweet fumes. There was an unused room in my home, it was a space I'd never entered, But curiosity led me to its door one day, like the secret finally surrendered. After I found the key and opened the lock, I stepped out into marigold sun, Which couldn't have been true, since it was an inner room, altered sudden! After walking a pleasant while, I found myself on rosy streets of yesterday, For yesterday I remembered so well, with windswept hibiscuses in disarray! The next day I visited glorious tomorrow, a hazy day I'd often dreamed of; Like the huge orange moon of summer, when people's dreams turn to love. Then I realized life's adventures never do end, only change from age to age, And adventure is still exotic adventure, no matter which is the current rage.

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Date: 1/12/2024 3:02:00 AM
- Vividly and beautifully described, Evelyn :) - A joy to read :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/12/2024 12:50:00 PM
A big thank you for your very nice comment, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Date: 1/11/2024 12:01:00 AM
Evelyn, this is a masterpiece. Real poetry. I simply love it. No nonsense words that make it hard to read, just imagery beyond belief. Reading it with the tune softly wafting as I read, I was enthralled by your talent. Thousands should read this. Happy New year Dear poet. I must read more of your poems. Thank you A fave .
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/11/2024 1:08:00 PM
You are more than welcome, my dear friend. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your joy inspiring remarks, and I am delighted by your fave. Blessings.
Date: 1/8/2024 2:31:00 AM
As I expected from your weekend-long poem, I read a marvellous pom dotted with nature and mighty imagery. I hope to read them all.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/8/2024 3:13:00 PM
It thrills me to know the tale met expectations. Your enduring interest in these stories is something I cherish. :)
Date: 1/7/2024 8:44:00 PM
Ahh gosh, what a resplendent poem, dear Evelyn.. This weekend musings are always a pleasure to read, where you transform the protagonist into different themes and conjure those vivid dimensions with your poetic abilities.. I think it's such a gift, to become and experience the essence of every professional be it a spy agent, a magician, a traveler or an actress.. Yess, I remember most of your profound writes! I do follow all these reveries as I think, these should be compiled in a book, honestly
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/8/2024 3:09:00 PM
Dear Hiya, your lovely words touch my heart in so many ways. It's such a pleasure to read them today. It makes the effort of writing so rewarding. I'm delighted by your interest in a book of stories. Thank you for the joy of your FAV, and for your kind remarks, as well. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:46:00 PM
This was such a unique ambience to visit in, full of vibrant imagery, depth and particularly I liked that ending.. Sooo beautiful and meaningful.. "After I found the key and opened the lock, I stepped out into marigold sun" Ahh, true magic begins from here! And those last lines really touched my heart.. Another FAV from your magnificent quill, dear poetess.. Sending you many best wishes and so much love ~ :)
Date: 1/6/2024 12:30:00 PM
Awesome rhymes and flow as always! Your poem is a vivid tapestry of a life well-travelled, painted with the brushstrokes of diverse experiences and the vibrant colours of the world. The imagery of being a 'sophisticated, world-class traveller' is both whimsical and evocative, capturing the essence of exploration and discovery. The verses weave seamlessly through your adventures, from the hottest deserts to fragrant fields, creating a mosaic of moments that celebrate the richness of life..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2024 11:10:00 PM
Deepest thanks for the delight that your comments bring. It's a pleasure to know you enjoyed this story. Many blessings. :)
Date: 1/6/2024 11:43:00 AM
Poem shows that there always is more to come. It's very encouraging.
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Date: 1/6/2024 11:04:00 PM
I'm so glad you found it to be so, Hilda. Thank you. :)
Date: 1/6/2024 6:18:00 AM
Wonderful images you convey, Evelyn--through cultures, nations, modes of transportation. Scenes you bring to fore take the reader on a splendid journey, my friend.
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Date: 1/6/2024 11:03:00 PM
I'm delighted that you enjoyed this tale. Thank you for your lovely remarks. It was very nice traveling with you, friend. :)
Date: 1/6/2024 3:22:00 AM
I see through your well woven words, so descriptive and so moving, how a traveler journeys through various shades of life and more, and how you’ve shown us all that was interesting and beautiful to the soul. I especially loved the secret door lines there, and how you’ve delivered that we all are just traveler no matter the age,adventures of life is never ending, if one keeps seeking. How deep and meaningful is that ending! Brilliant as always and i loved marigold sun and various flowers FAV
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2024 10:59:00 PM
I'm so pleased that this story struck a chord with you. Thank you for your heartwarming, uplifting response, and for your FAV. Blessings.
Date: 1/5/2024 5:23:00 PM
Evelyn, Your poem is a beautiful and evocative piece that takes the reader on a journey around the world. The vivid imagery and clever wordplay make it a joy to read. I especially love the line “Like jade waves on fairer shores of finally, where the fraught journey ends.” Keep up the great work! - Blessings, Daniel
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2024 10:52:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind expressions, Daniel. Your comment is such a delight. Have a wonderful day. :)

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