An Empty Throne - Part 2 of 9

An Empty Kingdom 

The news did spread, a kingdom’s will
For sorrow placed its shadowed hand
‘Pon castle steps the crowd did fill
As heart break took a firm command

The skies, a darkened clouded stain
As children wept in mother’s fold
Now lost amidst a dismal rain
This hour of sadness frigid cold

How could it be, their precious queen
Had fallen to a woeful stead
A tethered seed, nightmarish deem
Her majesty this day is dead

The knight, of shining armor might
Her lifeless body cradled deep
Staring straight to heaven’s light
Then bowed his head, began to weep

He raised her body ever strong  
Carried her through chambered door
An empty hallway wide as long
Depleted by this mournful chore

The villagers of forlorn feel
Gathered in the dampened street
The plight of loss in full reveal
Disconsolate of death’s defeat 

When then upon horizon’s glare
A silhouette of staggered steed
Towards the kingdoms stricken stare
In slow methodic steps proceed

This figure slumped of saddle ride
And weary strains of wistful yearns
Through gates of iron, wandered stride
A shout rings out, “Our king returns”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/11/2019 8:50:00 PM
Oh so loved this story!
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Date: 12/17/2016 10:40:00 PM
Hmmm ... things are getting pretty interesting in this epic poem, Chris. Beautiful language, and the plot thickens, eh. Onward to the third movement. Love this part deux though. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:12:00 PM
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Date: 12/14/2016 6:12:00 PM
Oh my.... this final line gave me goosebumps... "A shout rings out, “Our king returns”" :O (running to read part 3)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/14/2016 6:16:00 PM
Happy you are having fun with this Claudia. Thank you my friend.
Date: 12/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
"The villagers of forlorn feel Gathered in the dampened street The plight of loss in full reveal Disconsolate of death’s defeat"... I love the whole story and especially this stanza, onto 3
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Chris Green
Date: 12/13/2016 12:05:00 PM
Thank you again Darren for your kind thoughts.
Date: 12/12/2016 3:56:00 PM
Hi Chris, I agree with Heidi , this is so sad. It's good to know the king has returned. And it's hope for the kingdom after all. Well done. A without a doubt seven. Off to read the next installment: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I truly you are enjoying this. I hope it keeps your attention and you enjoy it all the way through, but if not, that' okay too.
Date: 12/12/2016 1:03:00 PM
So deep and sad, but shout for the King returning.....waiting for the rest of this neat write. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. I appreciate you staying with me on this one.
Date: 12/12/2016 12:34:00 PM
Wow!! Sitting on the edge of my seat! So vivid! I will save this one, my friend!! (I was just reading about the life if knights) 7+
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Chris Green
Date: 12/12/2016 12:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I am thrilled you liked this. More coming soon. : )
Date: 12/12/2016 12:32:00 PM
a mini-series well told, chris... reminds me of medieval times..next installment?.. huggs
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I will post part 3 in a little while. :)
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