An Empty Man

Hi there just perusing while I have time. I don't think you are loveless my friend, you emanate love and there fore you get it back. xx

Wow. I'm awed by this one. So strategically put together, as complicated and intricately designed as an android, yet so filled with void and empty concepts -- brings the poem alive and filled with abundant beauty. Maybe I'm not making much sense, but I really liked this one, especially the end. Always, Laura

You have to much passion to be loveless at heart. As I read it seemed to me you have a heartful of love.

I believe emptiness like this is deep pain for any man who has gone through what you have.and i believe that if they try to find what else is inside them.like you have.they'll have great knowledge. you have a really big heart.i can't say it enough. and im still reading your pages of poems.they are a nice read.i can feel them.not done yet my friend!<: -Always LYnette

I read this poem over slowly about 5 times. There is alot here. Can't take it all in at once. Alot of room for muse, about many subjects. Very interesting HG. I will come back to this one again. gets me contemplating. your poetry friend -Robert

a man full of love cant be called loveless,a man whose wife is in heaven cant be called wifeless,a man with a sleeping mother isnt without a mum,his mum is watching from above too,,this man has a heart full of love to give,yet first he needs to love himself..and the emptiness will be filled,love yourself for writing poetry,for seeing the sun everymorning,for having your soup family here.an empty man giving all he is to others,God loves you,he wants us here on this journey for a reason-find it.:)

Profound HG, Nice internal rhyme...Raul

You are not loveless..you just have to see it. My thoughts are with you HG.BG

This write packs a lot of punch, HG. The images are dark and vivid. A very sad existence, indeed. Very moving and thought provoking poetry, my friend. Blessings to you always, HG! Love, Robin