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An Empty Apartment Echo For Matt

My foot steps echo through the hall Roaring like a ferrocious lion Time has passed and surfaced again I am on the edge of a vast cliff of alone Do I jump or do I yell?? Dance around and act a fool Seek out the action in the night My foot step echos through the hall Dust bunnies dance into the corner For Matt's contest Empty Apartment free verse.

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Date: 12/29/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt Caliri's "Empty Apartment" contest Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2010 8:49:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your big top ten win in the Empty Apt. contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy your special win tonight so sweet with luv..
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Date: 12/18/2010 10:13:00 AM
Hi Doris. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Eamon
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Date: 12/17/2010 4:16:00 PM
won tenth place in the contest empty apartment.
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:47:00 AM
You did a splended job with this theme, Doris. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:34:00 AM
awesome pen you've got, doris...a real treat… hats off to you for the award!!huggs, nette
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Doris. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:56:00 PM
i always olve reading your poetry, Doris, this is exceptional. Harry
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:19:00 PM
This has such a different twist to the contest....nice one, Doris!!
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:04:00 AM
Yep! You've captured lonely, when the only comapany is a "Dust Bunny." Love, Dave
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:34:00 AM
another good one from you..I like your " clif of alone"..very nice. Good luck in the contest. BG
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